Comments: 108
Coconutsdismount [2011-05-08 23:33:33 +0000 UTC]
my most fav part o this is when she yells that she's missing glee. Missing glee can have very big consiquences. VERY BIG ones.
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Coconutsdismount In reply to inkscribble [2011-05-09 01:05:33 +0000 UTC]
totally. now, i have to say, not only did the glee line make me laugh, but i love the way your characters are draw. especially the angel maker you just made for doll divine. is amazing!
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TuxedoMiniMask In reply to inkscribble [2010-11-22 22:19:11 +0000 UTC]
Yea, we figure you won't be the only one. I am also traveling in December... So I am interested in seeing how this works out.
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Kibate [2010-11-14 05:51:45 +0000 UTC]
Hoi
Since Sailor Halcyon is my enemy the next round, i wanted to ask what exactly happened to her after this fight? Eris somehow...trapped her, right? What then? How does she get out? Does she remain "dark"?
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Kibate In reply to inkscribble [2010-11-14 14:36:53 +0000 UTC]
okay, thanks..i think i can work with that^^"
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Miimeme [2010-11-04 03:49:36 +0000 UTC]
I havn't had the chance to read it the, but i love the drawings, especially Eris's clothing. You should work for Tripp or Hot Topic, they need some cool clothing designs like yours. I love the ripped stockings and the shredded jacket. Also the wrought-iron apple is incredible, you have an eye for details.
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inkscribble In reply to Miimeme [2010-11-05 03:58:29 +0000 UTC]
Aww! How sweet of you! Thanks so much for the lovely comment!
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MamaLantiis [2010-10-27 00:47:12 +0000 UTC]
First, your style, Burton-Vision and otherwise is fantastic. It sets you and your art apart from everyone else. Second, your story-telling style is phenomenal. I rarely actually read comics, but your art caught my attention and your story drew me in. Finally, the use of flipping pages is great. How did you make them flip?
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MamaLantiis In reply to inkscribble [2010-10-28 02:04:44 +0000 UTC]
Wow thanks! I am reading about it now. I know almost nothing about flash but do a lot of CSS and Java, so this should be fun to play with!
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Kuroshi-tenshi [2010-10-26 21:45:06 +0000 UTC]
Made. of. WIN!
XD I loved that!
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OtteroftheEraser [2010-10-26 19:59:21 +0000 UTC]
Oh man. I'm screwed. XD I love this! It's so pretty and well drawn and the story is great and GAH. XP Evil! Halcyon's characterization is spot on and I like the idea of her working for DarkMatter as a hitman of some sort.
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psychmeout [2010-10-26 18:34:50 +0000 UTC]
Super pretty as usual. I love that you took the time to redesign everyone. The whole plot with Dark Matter is great, too!
The only thing is that the end is really sudden. I feel like there should at least be something there saying "tbc" or "the end."
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psychmeout In reply to inkscribble [2010-10-26 19:19:22 +0000 UTC]
I just meant a small word box at the bottom.
Awe, that's too bad you can only use an even number of pages. I guess it's not too bad a limitation.
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sailortitan [2010-10-26 17:57:18 +0000 UTC]
As always, the art is super amazing! everybody looks great. If I make it to the next round, there will be a strong temptation to give Eris a cameo out of pure selfishness for the awesome art, lol.
Overall the panel layout is pretty good, but it can be a bit tight/hard to follow in a couple spots. In the page where Halcyon uses "Sand Erosion", the panels are really narrow and I can't tell what's happening in a lot of them, especially in the one where Halcyon herself is attacking.
On the "Pressure Subjugation" page it's also kind of a big jump between the top panel and the bottom panel--it's not really clear how or why Eris is on top of Halcyon. I kind of do that myself, though... so maybe I shouldn't say anything... ¬.¬
Finally, may I humbly suggest a different page turning mechanism? It's a big clumsy, having to drag my cursor across the screen when I want to turn the page A "next" button is less glamorous but probably more practical.
Other than that, amazing as always!
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inkscribble In reply to sailortitan [2010-10-26 18:21:54 +0000 UTC]
Aaah. The thing is, I figured that considering Eris was the one coming at Halcyon shoulder first in the first place, it wouldn't be too surprising that she wound up on top! And I didn't want to draw a whole hissy cat fight - it's clumsy, unflattering, and really doesn't look good in a comic. Not like crazy martial arts. At the same time, considering Eris is a princess, has trouble with her leg muscles, and wearing heels, I didn't want her judo kicking Halcyon or whatnot. So all in all, I figured this was the best option.
Thanks for the crit on the Sand Erosion bit - I do want to be creative re: how I express things, so it was a test. It looks good to me, but I know what's supposed to be happening, so I'm probably not the best judge.
I actually really like this page turn - it makes it seem all natural to me. I like the fact that it looks like a book.
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