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MAXYMUS121 [2021-09-23 05:56:09 +0000 UTC]
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SilverKitten757 [2014-04-28 03:16:11 +0000 UTC]
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First of all, your cartoon-y style is definitely fitting with this scene. But what I like is those little details, like the "converse" Wheatley is wearing, with the Aperture logo instead of a star. The speaking, or signing, is rather clear, and understandable. It's not a clumsy speech session with a couple words hear and them, you cleaned it up without anything becoming excessive. Wheatley's "wiring" is also a nice touch, along with his nerd glasses. You also gave Chell's long fall boots a stylish touch, along with the concept of strapping the portal gun to her back. Also, in Wheatley's speech, I can almost hear the British in it! The background is simple and fitting, perfect for a cartoon like this. The one thing that I would recommend is that... Well.. Honestly, I can't think of anything I dislike about this piece! Lovely job with shading, not too excessive, just light touches here and there. Awesome job, keep it up!
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lunah05 [2017-07-19 04:29:58 +0000 UTC]
your art style is soo cute like woooaaahhh
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MRJCMiller [2016-12-14 05:26:02 +0000 UTC]
Oh. Oh dear.Β
When she learns who he is, she's going to kick him in the nerts. D:
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pohreby123 [2016-07-16 06:17:58 +0000 UTC]
sooooo cute
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Metaknightfan202 [2015-12-03 04:37:44 +0000 UTC]
I like this a lot! I kinda wanna see a continuation of this as well with Wheatley speaking to Chell.
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MLBlue [2014-01-20 06:37:52 +0000 UTC]
Chell in jeans. <3Β Β Nice job.
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MsAnonymous1 [2013-07-25 03:45:19 +0000 UTC]
cute!
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flyingscience628 [2013-07-23 01:02:26 +0000 UTC]
I love your art style. Very different (in a good way, of course!)
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ChloeLeeRogers1997 [2013-05-18 19:34:29 +0000 UTC]
I love this so much!! And I must say you quite possibly have the nerdiest Wheatley!!! That being a good thing of course.
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XxScourgeandRachelxX [2013-03-12 13:51:11 +0000 UTC]
Sorry about spelling im w4iting on my tablet.
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XxScourgeandRachelxX [2013-03-12 13:50:42 +0000 UTC]
This is great!
Im actually making a fanfiction about how after Wheatley was trapped in space, he sees a falling "star", and grabs onto it at the last second, making him fall to earth, and soon realises that the star was actually a girl, and a personaloty core at that. Her name is grace and wheatley falls in love with her, forgetting about chell completeley. Bte i dont like chell but my oponion is that no wonder wheatley betrayed chell, she was butt ugly. :l
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Silly606 [2013-01-16 17:56:56 +0000 UTC]
I love it lol
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Caritami [2012-11-18 00:03:33 +0000 UTC]
If you want, if you can give voice to Chell, Chell can speak apparently. But the creator of the game told. ''she can talk but I do not want'' (this is only a warning, and I love your drawing)
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wp72 [2012-11-06 22:40:44 +0000 UTC]
YES SHE CAN TALK DID YOU EVER LOOK AT PORTAL 2 POST MORDEM?
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JasmineAlexandra In reply to wp72 [2012-11-07 19:55:57 +0000 UTC]
what??? Post Mordem? What do you mean?....
& of course she can talk but she does suffer Selective Mutism from Post Traumatic Stress Syndrome...
She had been through allot of trauma & sometimes when someone suffers trauma & loss of control in the situations they are in, some people react in different ways.
Some can suffer from "selective mutism" it means that they have the ability to talk they just don't use it. Similarly, there is "conversion disorder," which is usually an effect of trauma also. This is when real, physical symptoms (such as muteness) occur, but with no medical explanation for them.
A treatment for people who suffer from this are to find alternate ways to communicate...as in texting or emailing....even sign language was used. A common misconception remains that a selectively mute patient is defiant or stubborn.
It is very rare in adults but as I have studied those who have suffered PTSD also may suffer form mutism. They just can't speak.
With Chell I want it to be a mystery whether she choses to speak or can't...besides all she says is "Yes" but to kill Wheatley....that wasn't used so I would go with this option. It adds depths in my opinion.
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wp72 In reply to JasmineAlexandra [2012-11-07 20:55:54 +0000 UTC]
this
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And In My Opinion She Suffers From Select Mutisum
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JasmineAlexandra In reply to wp72 [2012-11-07 21:08:11 +0000 UTC]
so does this mean you agree with me?
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MissLuckychan29 [2012-11-02 19:23:29 +0000 UTC]
Maybe they could fall inlove!
Wheatey and Chell... it'd be such a cute pairing.
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DeviouslyMoo [2012-11-02 15:57:43 +0000 UTC]
awww this is adorable! x3
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TheLunarDragons [2012-11-01 19:45:10 +0000 UTC]
Aww, this is so cute!!!
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EvelynLawliet [2012-11-01 09:43:57 +0000 UTC]
this is awesome! i love your cartoon style!
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EvilWheatley [2012-11-01 01:25:22 +0000 UTC]
great work! its been awhile since I've seen some chell x wheatley!
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HongsiTiMa [2012-11-01 01:00:32 +0000 UTC]
>β½< Adorable style!!!
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TheUpgradedModel [2012-11-01 00:16:42 +0000 UTC]
That comic made me go "Awww" as well. This is absolutely adorable. ^_^
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Crimzination [2012-11-01 00:13:38 +0000 UTC]
So cute~!
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