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Published: 2007-03-05 16:43:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 3420; Favourites: 34; Downloads: 164
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Yay, 4th page of the pitch.....any guesses on who the mystery villain is?
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heh, no word yet. Derek's editor hasn't had a chance to look it over, so still a waiting game at this point. But thanks for the confidence and support!
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derek? oh i thought you were ging with top cow? do you do commisions? ( before you get famous maybe i should try and get a cheap and humble price!!!)
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Nah, we have to go through Marvel as they are, of course, the owners of all things Hulk. I work for Top Cow right now on City of Heroes. As for commissions, I'm always looking for work. If you have something in mind, shoot me an email (jpm1023@gmail.com) and I'll see what I can do.Thanks again!
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Great storytelling, as I've said. What I particularly liked about this sequence was your use of shadows, really making them a key part in the composition. I particularly liked it in the dutch angle of the Mole Man on page 2.
Once again, I'm impressed by how you can make the smallest things dynamic. I'm talking about the Hulk-sized loogie in page 3!
However, I still think you need to make your gutters thicker. It's a small thing, but it goes a long way to balance the page's layout. Having really narrow gutters is like having a cut in a movie that's too abrupt.
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SICKSICKSICKSICKSICCCCK! Jon this panel fucking ROCKS man!
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as a really honest crit, i think in panel 5, you should make it as clear as possible that he's squinting with his left eye. maybe some heavier line weight or some blood running down his face. not to say that i don't love your stuff, i try my best to get to that level. but i though you might be able to take that crit and use it appropriatly.
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man, fantastic work. Derek showed me that Hulk you drew in his sketchbook and i was floored. i wish you much luck and success in your carrer in comics. your an amazing penciller. and your hulk is a real monster.
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Short, fat man in a cloak... Commands numerous monsters... Reads previous responses.... Mole Man?
XD
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Mole Man! and awesome pencils! I've really been enjoying these pages.
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oh wow ... Excellent work with the hectic layout conveying HULK RAGE!!!!
and ... maybe Venom? 
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naked charles barkley with a barbara streisand growth.
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Mole Man! Aswome old school villian pick.
People forget he was a mad-scientist.
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Unfortunately, no guesses. But, your rendition of the Hulk is quite "the bomb", as the kids say. Well done.
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