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"Akai tsubaki Shiroi tsubaki toOchinikeri"
by Kawahigashi Hekigotō (1873-1937)
"Red camelias
And white camelias too
They have fallen down"
(5-7-5)
Thank you! Translation by
"Red camellias, white camellias have fallen down "
...picture the grass or the moss covered with red and white camellias, and feel the spring...
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Yay!!!^______^
Thanks for commenting!!
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I like this haiku, mostly because it's about camellias.
By the way, if you don't mind, I would like to use that one. Only if you don't mind!
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Hey Trreisy^^ Yeah camellias really are beautiful flowers. Sure, go ahead!
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Thanks I appreciate it. ^-^
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"Red camelias
And white camelias too
They have fallen down"
(5-7-5)
でも今回は６-７-５でした！
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Thank you for the great translation, it's perfect!!!
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河東碧梧桐（かわひがし へきごとう）は、自由律俳句（五七五の定型俳句や五七五七七の定型短歌に対し、音数にとらわれない、または季語に縛られずに自由に表現する作品）を主張し、同じ正岡子規の弟子である保守伝統派の浜岡虚子と激しく対立しました。
椿の花がポタッポタって落ち、苔はえた地面に赤や白で埋まって行く様子が、とても印象的ですね。
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あのう…ちょっとむずかしい日本語で返事じちゃいました。でも、要はわかります。英語でも自由な詩もrhythmic詩もあります。
ところで、千代さんの書き方はすばらしいですね。長く長く練習しているでしょう。
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ライチュウさんのおっしゃる通りです。
ライチュウさんに褒めてもらえると、嬉しいです。ありがとう！
あなたの俳句『命の夜 暗く成るかな 祈り待つ』を筆で書いてみたいなあ...なんて思っています。
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えへへ！筆を手に入れました！
待ってください！
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Beautiful, i what i love of haiku is that they take you
to the place and you can feel like you're there.
Nice comment had leave ashigaru.
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yeah haikus are kind of magical! ^__^
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Indeed, they are !!
I wrote a few, long time ago...
Remove the "s" in haikus honey, you must know better than me that
the words in plural don't go with the "s"at the end like
the english language. That's why we say "All the samurai..."
instead of "All the samurais..."
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Oh cool you wrote them in Japanese? Yeah I tried to anglicise it...but you're right, it doesn't work well does it? ^__^
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No, i wroted in english, my japanese is actually too short,
like a couple of hundred words. But in english is easy, 'cos
in spanish (i remember you that i'm from Argentine) the words are
much more longer, for example "Sword" is one syllable, but in spanish
is "espada" "es-pa-da" 3 syllables, so for me is muuuuch more easy
in english. I try to follw the 5-7-5 rule.
Here's the [link] to some of my "haiku".
(I put it between "" 'cos i'm not a haiku poet, those are things that i wrote on my job to spend the time)
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Yeah I see. Hey your haiku are great, I like the one that goes "Shining blades...". Really cool. And I see Mr. Raichu has translated them! He's a great poet!^__^
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Thanks, that one defines the life of a samurai, ah ?
I'd the honour of having a translated haiku by him !!
Thanks again for the king words !
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Camellias were one of my mother's favorite flowers. When they bloom in my garden, I always think of her.
Our pet rabbits love to eat the blossoms, too!
This is such a beautiful work, Chiyo-san. I love the extra art you've added to this, too!
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Yes camellias are really gorgeous! They're spring flowers but they blossom in winter...I love them too! And they must be delicious, too!
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