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laffanahaff — Yoshi's Islands

Published: 2006-01-26 21:45:28 +0000 UTC; Views: 1778; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 17
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Description I don't mean to be repetitious buuuut we had to have over 100 objects for the finished project...the first Yoshi I did had about 64, so what started as a little bit of background eventually evolved into this...there are still a couple minor color things i have to take care of, but i wanted to get it up for some critique...let me know about ANYTHING, composition, color, shape, size, positions anything....thanks everyone
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Comments: 7

EddieX13 [2008-03-08 03:39:00 +0000 UTC]

I really like this!!!

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w0nt0nn00dlez [2006-01-27 19:48:22 +0000 UTC]

it is awesome, but i do second the shadow on the water problem. it just seems a little off. maybe a darker shadow.
or maybe you could use the exact shadow patern. it is hard to say really. but if you can't figure out how to fix it, leave it.

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Veechoo [2006-01-27 00:44:09 +0000 UTC]

This is excellent! I love how adorable everything looks. One thing though: you see where the water is shaded because of the incoming Bowser? Instead of greyish blue, it might have been better to use something closer to dark blue or navy-ish.

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laffanahaff In reply to Veechoo [2006-01-27 03:32:07 +0000 UTC]

advice taken! thanks veechoo!

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fanficbug [2006-01-26 21:47:24 +0000 UTC]

Aww, it's so cute! I love the stylization; it's very playful and quite in the right vein for the Yoshi/Mario series. ^_^ Love the cell shading, love the colors, love the mood. +Fav!

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laffanahaff In reply to fanficbug [2006-01-26 22:39:43 +0000 UTC]

wow thanks!

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fanficbug In reply to laffanahaff [2006-01-27 00:43:30 +0000 UTC]

^_^ No problem, I loved it. You did an excellent job!

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