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marinaawin In reply to sweetangel0467 [2014-04-22 17:23:32 +0000 UTC]
Thank you so much for replying and it is indeed very useful.
You are so very right about the details I tried to put in every single one.
Flying hounds... there is an idea I will try that next time.
As for the hair I was trying for wavy without being too much out of place and it got repetitive in the wave pattern... I will see if I can improve that next time as well.
I am starting to feel my way around a tablet so I got carried away with details... and I guess the piece got a serious case of "not representing a forest because of the trees" .
I will take into account your advice for the next piece.
Many tanks again
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Salokorai [2014-04-20 19:25:26 +0000 UTC]
This is a really nice work with the textures! This time you used them decently and it fits in perfectly with the lighting.
The skin is very well done and the hair looks quite realistic.
But the skin is a little too smooth and doll-like (at least to be realistic) and the lips are too bright for it, I think.
They should pop out a little bit more. Also the eyes are lined a bit too dark. I would suggest you play more with the variation of the skin-colour. What helped me out a great deal, was to make the skin more red-ish, when I created the shadow.
Also keep in mind, that usually the skin gets a little bit of a red tone in areas like nose, cheeks and around the eyes.
I would try to refrain from using black in the face, because it might make it look more comic-like and less realistic, since we don't really have true black in our eyes or on our face in general.
Only, if you want it to be realistic, that is!
Also, while the hair does look great, it is also a tiny bit repetitive. But I don't think, that this is much of a problem.
But the background is really good!
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 19:47:15 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for the watch also
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 19:42:25 +0000 UTC]
So the eyelashes should be the base color of the hair if I do not want to make them blond? I did not find any good references for the eyelashes so I used black for them. I am asking this because I know that there are people that have blond eyelashes but most do not... I did not used black on the skin rather a very dark brown. I will use more red on the next piece, more on the lips also so as not to make them that bright. About the hair I tried to make it wavy I can see the repetition for the waves... I will see if I can apply a little more disorder next time. i sincerely appreciate your comments and I will keep them in mind.
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 20:01:55 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for pointing that out. It is a big help.
Note to self: treat the eyelashes as you do normal hair and eyebrows.
I put the pink wet line on the eyelid before the eyelashes unfortunately when I applied the eyelashes it got covered by them.
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Salokorai In reply to marinaawin [2014-04-20 20:06:41 +0000 UTC]
Ah, I see. Do you paint on one layer or do you use different ones?
I like to use different ones, although its actually usually better to paint using only one, since you can create much nicer borders.
But maybe you could create new layers for new parts of your paintings and then melt them with the background-layer, once you like the positioning and all that.
It might solve the covering-problem!
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 20:14:37 +0000 UTC]
I use different layers for each piece (skin, hair etc.) but at the end I merge them for the final pass of shadows. I use seven shadow color going from the lighter to the darkest. When I reach the darkest I merge all the layers in one and apply the final shadow color. The last layer with shadows is usually the one containing the entire work.
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 20:31:05 +0000 UTC]
I will try and correct the problems present in this piece at the next one. I do not have any save work before with the different layers to work on so I will have to start over from 0 to correct this one...
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-20 20:35:43 +0000 UTC]
you are welcome I am quite partial to elves (be them dark or other color) Not to fond of vamps but I like the roses in the picture.
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-22 17:32:44 +0000 UTC]
I know what you mean. I always have a story playing in my head for my characters, unfortunately I cannot always quite render what I have in my mind. Mostly because I am trying not to forget all the details and focus too much on them and the second reason is that I still suffer from "tablet fright" I am at the stage where I can render with a tablet without following my hand with my eyes but I still feel a small lump in my neck each time I connect it to the PC thinking that I will do something wrong with the next line or so.
But I try to improve all the time so critiques are very important to me. Thank you again for that.
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marinaawin In reply to Salokorai [2014-04-22 17:48:28 +0000 UTC]
It will go in a couple of weeks I am sure once I learn how I can dismantle and put back together one. Same thing happened with computers and once I learned what was inside one all went well. Weird I know
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L-Y-N-S [2014-04-20 18:33:27 +0000 UTC]
I realyl like what you've done in regards to texture and colors
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marinaawin In reply to L-Y-N-S [2014-04-20 18:38:12 +0000 UTC]
Thank you very much.
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PaintedHood [2014-04-05 15:43:17 +0000 UTC]
What a rich use of color, I love the tattoo and great job with the background.
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marinaawin In reply to PaintedHood [2014-04-19 13:25:07 +0000 UTC]
Many thanks and appologies for the late reply. It was a crazy period for me latelly with troubles with the computer to top it all off. All the best to you and your loved ones for the holidays.
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AmbergrisElement [2014-04-05 15:33:35 +0000 UTC]
He has a very beautuful face and hair.Also great work on the clothing and background.
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marinaawin In reply to Roadkill-Sarny [2014-03-15 18:22:29 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. last two layers were a pain to finish.
Note to self: "do not get mad at the tablet. It is not its fault that painting each strand is taking two days".
I like Vanessa Update it reminds me of a cartoon I watched a while ago Gargoyles (favorites Goliath and Puck).
Thank you for the fave also
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Roadkill-Sarny In reply to marinaawin [2014-03-15 18:30:16 +0000 UTC]
Urrgh, I honestly don't understand how people use tablets. I've tried it. They just seem...broken.
Oh my God, I LOVE Gargoyles! That show was a MASSIVE part of my childhood. Too bad it's too expensive to get on DVD...
By the way, I really appreciate your looking at my work. :3
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marinaawin In reply to Roadkill-Sarny [2014-03-15 18:47:02 +0000 UTC]
Yap, strange to get used to a tablet that's for sure. I took me around 6 months to get used to mine. The tricky part is to get used not to follow your hand with your eyes Unless you happen to have a Cintiq which is very expensive.
I know what you mean and you are going to laugh but that show lead me to Shakespeare and it was fun when all my other classmates were impressed that I managed to read Macbeth and Midsummer Night's Dream way ahead of them - all because Gargoyles cartoon show
No problem send you a watch too.
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marinaawin In reply to Roadkill-Sarny [2014-03-21 14:36:05 +0000 UTC]
I am very curious so if you throw any piece of information my way I am most likely go and check out the source and everything that is to know about the topic. In this case there were a few episodes in the show talking about Macbeth (him making a pact with three witches in which was bound to Demona if I remember correctly), so I saw it and I was intrigued and I told mom about it and she gave me Macbeth by Shakespeare to read. Then along came Puck a few episodes later so I went reading Midsummer Night's Dream. So that's how Gargoyles lead me to Shakespeare... and it is a tad funny if you think of it so no worries there if you smile at it, I am glad if I can make someone smile.
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marinaawin In reply to SicilianValkyrie [2014-03-13 21:40:04 +0000 UTC]
Thank you. I love the hounds in your brush-
pack. I had a storybook about King Arthur in which there were hounds like these in your brushpack unfortunately I do not know where it is at the moment.
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SicilianValkyrie In reply to marinaawin [2014-03-17 01:21:08 +0000 UTC]
Oh, it's sad when you loose a file! I have lost many of the older ones because I lost the backup :S
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marinaawin In reply to SicilianValkyrie [2014-03-19 09:17:42 +0000 UTC]
Yap this happened to me sometimes too , but in this case I was talking about a real book (paper and covers) which I have no idea where in the library is supposed to be (got a lot of books over the years and it is a tad hard to look around two walls and a cabinet full of them).
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