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MikkiMarie β€” Once Upon a Nightmare
Published: 2013-05-04 04:44:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 4517; Favourites: 344; Downloads: 1
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Description Once upon a mystery
Once upon a crime
Once upon a lullaby
Once upon a rhyme
Once upon a thunderstorm
Once upon a lie
Because every nightmare tends to start
With once upon a time.
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Comments: 78

RaeGaming [2018-06-24 01:32:00 +0000 UTC]

straight to the point and i love it

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swooningfangirl [2015-04-14 20:59:58 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely remarkable. Well done!

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KawaiiShootingStar [2014-01-16 04:01:00 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing! <3Β The poem flows very well... there are no breaks in the meter. You conveyed the message beautifully, even through just 35 words. I really like it! ^^



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SpikeyMacksy [2013-10-24 07:34:14 +0000 UTC]

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CryingChrysocolla In reply to SpikeyMacksy [2016-06-05 11:47:53 +0000 UTC]

what the fuck younger me

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SpikeyMacksy In reply to CryingChrysocolla [2017-01-27 13:31:30 +0000 UTC]

honestly i dont know :<

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maxxedoutdj [2013-09-02 17:20:47 +0000 UTC]

This is already amazing, but I feel like this would make a wonderful song. :3

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pctomgirl [2013-08-02 21:57:35 +0000 UTC]

great job! I liked it

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MikkiMarie In reply to pctomgirl [2013-08-03 21:59:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

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pctomgirl In reply to MikkiMarie [2013-08-04 00:38:50 +0000 UTC]

no problem

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DJShaydez [2013-07-08 03:57:53 +0000 UTC]

That is amazing! favoriting!

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BillyTree [2013-07-07 22:23:30 +0000 UTC]

wonderfully brilliant

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Arden-Crystal [2013-07-03 02:21:38 +0000 UTC]

My worst nightmare started as a fairy tale,
One of the best things that ever happened to me.
It all went downhill from there.

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HerMoony [2013-07-02 06:53:36 +0000 UTC]

This is so true. One of my favorite quotes was always.

"They say dreams come true... They forgot nightmares are dreams to"

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devilla666 [2013-06-30 17:06:27 +0000 UTC]

I think you've been reading my mind.

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Midnightbiter [2013-06-27 16:22:05 +0000 UTC]

LOVE THIS!

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PrincessMiku16 [2013-06-26 15:48:06 +0000 UTC]

Nightmares start it off...
As usual, something to be contained inside is expressed in writing. Entertaining all who read~
Quick they might be but they tend to break walls built around readers. Just like me!
I am in love with every piece I read its quite addictive I might say! See you in the near future fellow author.

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NobodiesDragonGirl [2013-06-12 01:31:01 +0000 UTC]

Very true! I really like this piece!

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dave-bischoff-expess [2013-06-11 01:38:20 +0000 UTC]

You're on to something here. The archetypes of fear and dread which can be felt but elude definition are the Myths (i.e., "fairy tales") of old Europe, especially as recorded by the Brothers Grimm.

Their focus was German folklore, whose intertwined tangled roots with other mythologies, can be traced to ancient Babylon.

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moonlightshines9467 [2013-06-09 03:52:47 +0000 UTC]

This is beautiful. well done!

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Meeshee123 [2013-06-07 00:50:27 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could give something more constructive, but all I can say is I LOVE this poem!

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MelanieThonk [2013-06-06 02:45:13 +0000 UTC]

I wish I could just favorite your account...It would make things much easier because I love all of you poetry... T.T

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Puppyeyes427 [2013-06-05 22:31:26 +0000 UTC]

Oi, you are, one of the best, Poets, I have ever, ever, found. The Stars looked down upon me as I searched through the Poems of DA. Keep on writing, mate.

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HinataKeks [2013-06-04 19:33:51 +0000 UTC]

I love this poem.
It flows very good and is easy to read.

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SeraphinaPitchiner [2013-06-04 02:04:02 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful

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MikkiMarie In reply to SeraphinaPitchiner [2013-06-04 02:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!!

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SeraphinaPitchiner In reply to MikkiMarie [2013-06-05 00:14:32 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. My father also likes it.

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demonsLOVer1 [2013-06-04 01:57:33 +0000 UTC]

This has to be favorite one yet.

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MikkiMarie In reply to demonsLOVer1 [2013-06-04 02:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Aw thank you.

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Lulu-3 [2013-06-03 23:57:30 +0000 UTC]

This is absolutely touching. I've read several of your poems and this seems especially striking to me; I can really connect to it. I absolutely love your work!

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MikkiMarie In reply to Lulu-3 [2013-06-04 02:26:25 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, so much! <3

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nightshade-keyblade [2013-05-29 12:55:14 +0000 UTC]

Now this is what I love in a poem. It's not overly complex with rhymes and metre but it still speaks a lot.

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TheGothicSongbird [2013-05-24 03:34:45 +0000 UTC]

For as short as it is, it's quite lovely. I enjoyed it very much!

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ellaeaglex [2013-05-18 23:00:37 +0000 UTC]

really good for short work!![link]

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GhostOfTheEmptyGrave [2013-05-11 18:33:46 +0000 UTC]

Simple but amazing.

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Miss-sunshine-fairy [2013-05-09 12:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Quick, clever, amusing.

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MizuPics [2013-05-09 11:28:12 +0000 UTC]

I'm reaching for my guitar... This should be some kind of bridge to a longer song.

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MikkiMarie In reply to MizuPics [2013-05-09 16:42:40 +0000 UTC]

I loved what you sent to me! <3

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MizuPics In reply to MikkiMarie [2013-05-10 07:28:35 +0000 UTC]

In the bizarre off chance I ever got paid, I'd totally pay you, but I don't think it'll ever get that far!! <3

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MizuPics In reply to MikkiMarie [2013-05-10 07:26:52 +0000 UTC]

Meep! I'm not a professional or anything, do I have your permission to play this for like, friends and stuff?

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MikkiMarie In reply to MizuPics [2013-05-10 14:35:41 +0000 UTC]

Yes of course

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TormentaDeEstrellas [2013-05-09 09:59:13 +0000 UTC]

wonderfully written.

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xZ0MBiiEx [2013-05-08 23:25:05 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, great job!

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theghostofjen [2013-05-08 04:55:45 +0000 UTC]

i absolutely love this!!!!

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MikkiMarie In reply to theghostofjen [2013-05-08 04:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks

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theghostofjen In reply to MikkiMarie [2013-05-09 00:23:14 +0000 UTC]

welcome

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CrimsonChandelier [2013-05-08 01:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Positively brilliant work.
Captivating beyond explanation.

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Winter995 [2013-05-07 22:11:51 +0000 UTC]

Amazing

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Lilithmae1231 [2013-05-07 16:48:16 +0000 UTC]

Very nice. Very nice, indeed.

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breathinbreathout [2013-05-05 04:49:37 +0000 UTC]

love it

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