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Published: 2011-02-13 12:16:50 +0000 UTC; Views: 1764; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 42
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Wip character concept.His name is SchrΓΆdinger and he's really fucking insane. I think he's an assassin or something, a barefooted assassin. Dont ask him why, he is insane after all. Anyway, he generally uses a suppressed left handed H&K USP .45 (you know what they say about lefties) and that crazy thing on his eye, is some magical device that gives him an inhumanly accurate shot. If a target is within absolute maximum range, he'll be able to hit it, compensating for any variables that may be obstructing him. Of course, he cant use it for too long, or he'll go even more insane. (who knows it could have something to do with his insanity? o__O)
So yeah here, Its not done, so give me some critique, tips suggestions plz.
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Brightened up the poor chap a bit, also tried to enlarge hands.
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hi mate!
i know that i have promised to comment .....im really sorry that i couldnt do it earlier.
so basically dont know if you even need som input ? if you have already finished this guy...
anyway! 
i like the characteristics you added so far. he has got some background story which is very nice and essential! you could possibly take this further a bit. you said that he got this eye and by using it it drives him insane. so basically its that give and take philosophie here. how about you intergrate that articifial eye in there a bit more. id love to see the flesh around it turning unhealthy and purple or dark red. it is effecting him. how about some dark veins reaching out from it. we have to actually see the danger of this gadget. it has to mess him up a bit to make it more believable!
i like the idea of the barefoot thing. it adds some to the character! but on the other side he also wears that nice gentlemen like fashion. no one knows why and why its that light grey tone. how come? well it looks a bit plain to be honest. you gotta add some more details to it maybe? how about a little red flower reaching out of his poket? something alive to pimp the whole clothes thing u know. maybe he was in love with a nice lady and got his heart broken or had to try to save her live while being barefoot but didnt make it in time? (although saving some time by leaving his shoes behind ;D) so yeah his clothing surely need that one little detail imo.
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Hey man, thanks a lot for the comment, this feedback will come in very handy in the future! Also thanks for putting all the effort into your response! It is people like you that really make Deviant Art an amazing place. Thank you!
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no need to thank me really
take care!
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Im going to guess you want this as your request? Or something else perhaps? (BTW this song probably matches him perfectly ->[[link] ] the lyrics are pretty literally insane)
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haha insane indeed. But I dont think music can really capture this guys level of insanity. And if it were, it'd be more like random noise, varying static, and chaotic piano notes xD
And for the commission, uhm maybe pic one of my mecha and do your take on it.
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You should look through the Umineko no Naku Koro ni game Soundtrack, there is music of that exact nature.
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Ohh haha yeah I think I've heard some of that stuff. I was learning one on my bass actually. Insane indeed haha
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wow, just wow. crazy and niiice!
good job on this one.
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Has he got his cat out of that box yet? Or was it never there?
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Haha I dont think the cat ever had the opportunity to make it in the box D:
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Haha! Like your notes on the page. xP Your shading is really nice and it's very well done, though I would agree with someone below that a pocket watch seems like it would fit nice with the character
Like the concept and hope to see more of him, looks like a fun character xD
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hmm, maybe thats a good idea
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A whip, you say?
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may put some chool whip on it too
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Did you mean "Cool Whip"?
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non, chool quip
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What is that?
Is it similar to HUEVOS SPLASH?!
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nah i was making a family guy reference.
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A show I never watch.
Good job.
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haha i havent for years, it just stuck xD
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I think I watched some...once...years ago...plural...
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Like...ten, maybe.
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loool man. he is REALLY fucking insane XD
looks cool so far. the thing i would say is to give the pocket watch? on his eye some highlights or something to make it seem metal
how did you paint this so well D::::
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Hmm thats a good idea. And and used a few jacket references to get close on the shading and stuff
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WOA! maybe you can give him some pills to calm him down?? like those crazy folks in asylum.. LOL
man.. overall ilove this person... but the hair seems to normal to be insane.... sorry ...
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haha, cant be all insane
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Awesome! I like that he's barefoot.
His hands and feet seem a little too small. When I was taking life drawing at school, the instructor always told me to exaggerate the hands and feet. Because it'd look much better looking a bit bigger than looking a lot smaller and irregular. Scale of the USP pistol seems too large, or because your character has small hands. I'm guessing the device on his eye is an artificial eye or some kind of scouter thing.
So yeah, I think you need to think more about proportions and scale than anything else. Because details and "prettying" it up comes near the end. 
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Hey, thanks, that helps a lot. I tend to always draw my hands and feet to small, its probably a K-on thing lmao [link]
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Ah I see! Well, if you want that, make the gun smaller or something. The contrast between them is too large. It feels like his hand is going to snap off while holding the pistol, haha!
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haha, nah I was just joking, I definitely dont want that xD
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hahaha I'm glad I pulled the look off xD
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