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Description The cast line up from the dubious writefaggotry I indulged in recently. [link]

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Lt. Daneel Calliban, Commissar Jaes "Jellyfish" Quallen, Lt Den, Commissar Conrad F Raege, Major Duggan, S.P Jonquil "Cuddles" Lancaster.

Somethin' to do while I wait for the bus.

I feel I should point out, as there is occasionally confusion about such matters, that I did NOT invent Commissar jellyfish.

In a thread, maybe a little over a year ago, on /tg/ some cosplay of a commissar with medium blonde hair was posted and he was quickly agreed upon as the least intimidating commissar ever. One who could never get anyone to toe the line, and whose orders were punctuated with ums and ers. But who was "looked after" by his troops, and was always at the front of things.

I like the idea very much and didn't want it to slip to far into obscurity, so I wrote a story follow up to the concept.
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Mr-Culexus In reply to ??? [2014-10-02 04:01:53 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, he's a voidborn. Big fella.

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SolCannibal [2013-10-04 03:08:48 +0000 UTC]

Would the comissar cosplayer perharps be this one? 1d4chan.org/images/3/33/Commis…

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Mr-Culexus In reply to SolCannibal [2013-10-04 05:56:27 +0000 UTC]

Image aint working bro

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SolCannibal In reply to Mr-Culexus [2016-10-23 03:17:15 +0000 UTC]

Trying again after years - this comissar perhaps? photo.cosplay.com/36234/159422…

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Mr-Culexus In reply to SolCannibal [2016-10-23 04:32:50 +0000 UTC]

html

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SolCannibal In reply to Mr-Culexus [2016-10-23 09:51:23 +0000 UTC]

Let me try in another way...

h t t p : / / p h o t o . c o s p l a y . c o m / 3 6 2 3 4 / 1 5 9 4 2 2 1 . j p g

h t t p s : / / 1 d 4 c h a n . o r g / i m a g e s / 3 / 3 3 / C o m m i s s a r C o s . j p g


Maybe i spaced it a little too much, but now you can get the links and look if you care to, i guess.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to SolCannibal [2016-10-23 13:57:08 +0000 UTC]

Nah, that's not the guy that started it.

A big factor was, rather unfairly, the guy pretty obviously wasnt ready to get his picture taking he had his weapon down and an incredibly relaxed, benign expression.

I have it somewhere, google image search doesnt seem to.

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SolCannibal In reply to Mr-Culexus [2016-10-23 14:50:14 +0000 UTC]

I suspected it might be such a case, makes sense - but after so long was more focused in getting the links of this guy through than anything. XD

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Zarim [2010-01-11 06:54:14 +0000 UTC]

I think I'll write a little ditty or two about Jaes there, he's a great concept.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Zarim [2010-01-11 14:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Groovy

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t1o5m [2009-10-12 12:53:41 +0000 UTC]

so is this team going to have a comic or were they just a nother draf of the main team

or is it a diffent time and place in her life

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Mr-Culexus In reply to t1o5m [2009-10-12 13:08:35 +0000 UTC]

They're the cast from a short Ragged Edges story I wrote.

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t1o5m In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-10-12 13:10:54 +0000 UTC]

ok thank you

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Stormbadger [2009-10-08 07:38:08 +0000 UTC]

Any who, good job on these. I quite like Lt Den, Raege, Calliban (moustachio) and 'Cuddles'.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Stormbadger [2009-10-08 08:11:37 +0000 UTC]

Glad you like it.

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Stormbadger In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-10-08 08:21:59 +0000 UTC]

So, what does the F in Raege's name stand for?

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Stormbadger [2009-10-08 08:26:00 +0000 UTC]

Frakking

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Stormbadger [2009-10-08 07:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Conrad F Raege. What does F stand for?

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Stormbadger [2009-10-08 08:20:55 +0000 UTC]

Fraggrenade.

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Stormbadger In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-10-08 08:23:26 +0000 UTC]

Oooo...kay...
Who get's a middle name like that?

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RuggedOutlaw [2009-09-15 09:38:52 +0000 UTC]

I demand more Raege...I'm just sayin.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to RuggedOutlaw [2009-09-15 12:58:27 +0000 UTC]

Thank's for sayin'

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Cylexus [2009-09-03 17:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Heh, Regimental Pos(t)ing.

Its a military thing, leave me alone.

By the way, from the thumbnail, I at first thought that both the Catachans had their arms around Commissar Raege's waist, and was about to type in a whole essay's worth of nonsense about how awesome I thought that was.

But alas my eyes decieved me.

Damn you eyesight!!

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Cylexus [2009-09-04 12:44:20 +0000 UTC]

Long time no see.
I'm not sure why that's awesome, but I'll take your word for it.

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Cylexus In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-09-04 12:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Well, I would have to admit finding the hinted at situation of Raege being 'close' to both a male and female Catachan to have been distinctivly erotic.

... Yeah, anyway, I was away at a T.A training Camp 2 weeks of realising just how unfit I am. Heh. So I'll be checking back on your art n stuff now.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Cylexus [2009-09-04 13:01:59 +0000 UTC]

Solid.

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Cylexus In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-09-04 15:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Cool.

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Jarheadcharon [2009-08-30 22:10:54 +0000 UTC]

I love your ensemble casts!

I, too caught the Flashman vibe from Calliban, although without the bullying aspect. He seems like he embodies the arrogant Victorian/Praetorian vibe perfectly, although with an aura of competance.

Commissar Quallen - I remember the cosplayer who you're referring to. Also, I caught a hint of Rincewind (Pratchett's "Discworld" novels) from him, too. Rincewind is also incompetant, although you'll never catch him voluntarily at the front of ANYTHING. *grins* Quallen doesn't, by chance, have an abulatory sea-chest that follows him around, does he? *grins*

Lt. Den - Oh dear... As stated above: "Dat Everything" *Drools*

Love the idea for the Catachan "Whoopass" Tea. Suits them right perfectly, I think. Also, Raege = awesome here. Nicely dynamic pose.

Major Duggan seems to be the sort who'll kick your ass at either a wrestling match or a game of chess. Don't know why I thought that last piece. Just seems there's more to him than just beef.

Cuddles is, as always, awesome and adorable.

All in all, nicely done!

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Jarheadcharon [2009-08-30 22:26:24 +0000 UTC]

Thankyou very much for such a well rounded and detailed opinion, this very much the sort of thing that brightens my morning.

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MarbiChora [2009-08-27 04:16:43 +0000 UTC]

And Raege has that awesome stance of hers.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to MarbiChora [2009-08-27 05:17:37 +0000 UTC]

Awesome?

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MarbiChora In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-08-29 05:08:37 +0000 UTC]

It is. It's very.. powerful. She know's she's the boss.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to MarbiChora [2009-08-29 07:20:31 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad that comes across.

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Vladdyboy [2009-08-26 04:25:01 +0000 UTC]

Whoah! S.P. is looking pretty awesome, here, nice you've put some eyebrows on her, I love the way she shows a different expression then her blank-face, evil grin.

And Raege is looking pretty hot, lol but Conrad is a boy's name! ha! What's the F. stand for? Ffffuuuu?

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Vladdyboy [2009-08-26 04:58:09 +0000 UTC]

I see what you mean about cuddles, but shes not mean have brows here, its just a mixture of the notches on her eyes, and my sloppy line work. Nice idea though.

"Fuckmothering" Owing once again to her dad wanting her to seem badass.

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Vladdyboy In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-08-27 22:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I messed up when I read the names, to me,

Cuddles' 'eyebrows" are actually part of the goggles ain't they? It makes her look badass

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Vladdyboy [2009-08-28 04:17:51 +0000 UTC]

Glad you think so!

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Yerileikre [2009-08-26 03:01:14 +0000 UTC]

Dem suspenders.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Yerileikre [2009-08-26 03:30:06 +0000 UTC]

as you say.

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GizesNumbers [2009-08-25 21:58:23 +0000 UTC]

Commissar Jaes "Jellyfish" Quallen in concept reminds me of Lieutenant "Tiger" Blouse from Monstrous Regiment.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to GizesNumbers [2009-08-25 23:24:58 +0000 UTC]

Dunno what that is. But cool.

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PhantomR In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-08-26 07:18:50 +0000 UTC]

Terry Pratchett Novel. Look it up, it is a grand read!

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Neuroticfanboy [2009-08-25 21:02:50 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmm cuddles! :3

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Mr-Culexus In reply to Neuroticfanboy [2009-08-25 23:27:49 +0000 UTC]

Easy, tiger.

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saintbomber [2009-08-25 19:48:26 +0000 UTC]

Is that a can of whoop-ass Raege is holding?

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Mr-Culexus In reply to saintbomber [2009-08-25 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]

Its an empty food can full of tea. Your answer is better.

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saintbomber In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-08-26 05:26:59 +0000 UTC]

With that stance, it could have reasonably been either.
I'll go halvsies with you and call it baddass-can-tea.

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Mr-Culexus In reply to saintbomber [2009-08-26 05:31:36 +0000 UTC]

No need for compromise. I'll just have it that the billycan tea that the catachans drink is nicknamed "Whoopass" that way, we're both right.

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saintbomber In reply to Mr-Culexus [2009-08-26 15:47:41 +0000 UTC]

What a guy!

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Wise-Idiot In reply to saintbomber [2009-08-25 21:38:18 +0000 UTC]

Naw, it's a can of Exterminatus.

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