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Published: 2015-01-16 09:33:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 586; Favourites: 22; Downloads: 0
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Aight! It's been a while but I touched up and fixed some things about the text from Critique.
My scrap watchers have already read it so I figured I'd share the revised version with you guys!
Hopefully the text is a lot less jarring!
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Eyyyy my final for History of Comics class is done!
It's kind of like a pilot for cD from Colin's Point of view! The interactions within aren't exactly canon, but his backstory and motivations are.
Nij's behavior isn't exactly canon either.
It's also my first attempt at a serious comic in a page format. So woop de doo for that.
Please, my fantastic scrapwatchers, tell me what you think!
- Would you want to read more?
- Is the story clear?
- Any Constructive Criticism on layout, pacing, etc?
Artist Comments:
As you can see I didn't use that other cover !
It was way too dark for this thing! (But still cool.)
