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raumzeit โ€” whisper

Published: 2003-12-06 13:41:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 936; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 464
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Description Thanks so much for getting inspired to write this beautiful poem:


Where I sleep, not alone, but with fading dreams
Tangled in these painful branches of trust
I look for desire and soulful beams
Where water and light meets passing lust

Just like life, this road is covered with fog
It takes time and broken rules to find truth
You think that they hear your profound monologue
But all they hear is the whispers of youth

Never to die, I set my goals high and loud
The grass is so green here, so fresh
I can be foolish, yes, but never too proud
Of the path I chose, often burning my flesh

I listen to what the nature has to say
To the trees down the road that see it all
This bitter sweet fog is up for a delay
Iโ€™ll follow the whispers, even if I see nothing at all
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Comments: 34

jesterday [2005-07-03 16:20:48 +0000 UTC]

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Nemu769 [2005-04-11 09:46:22 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow...
It's so beautiful how the branches and trees fade away.
Those leaves infront of the picture...I can smell the air!

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SufferMan [2004-09-13 21:19:16 +0000 UTC]

Did you go see that movie... what was it called now again? "The Village" I believe... anyway, this photo reminds me of that forest which is portrayed in that movie. Which is a good thing of course .

Very nice shot, it has this eerie (did I spell that right) feeling all over it.

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cadmus [2004-04-12 17:33:22 +0000 UTC]

Nice fog shot, well composed and executed.

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NoNotNopeNah [2004-04-08 22:52:39 +0000 UTC]

how beautiful, and how serene...makes me want to write some good poetry, heh. a definite fave

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raumzeit In reply to NoNotNopeNah [2004-04-12 17:09:46 +0000 UTC]

so go for it!! i'll post it in my description of the picture... hu?

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NoNotNopeNah In reply to raumzeit [2004-04-12 18:21:35 +0000 UTC]

hmm, sounds like a plan. I'll work on in, just gotta get to the beach with my pen and paper.

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blindgorgon [2004-02-24 00:31:27 +0000 UTC]

great mysterious feel.

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EmmaEsme [2004-02-23 22:05:38 +0000 UTC]

Wow, the fog looks SO thick! Nice photo!

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dee777 [2004-02-23 21:12:51 +0000 UTC]

ooo thats awsome!

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azulitalinda [2004-02-23 13:54:22 +0000 UTC]

this is beautiful
You have really cpature the coldness and the feeling of whispering here fantastic work

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spotter300 [2004-02-23 13:06:14 +0000 UTC]

very moodly i like it alot well done /me pats raumzeit on the head

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macmartin [2004-02-23 10:31:21 +0000 UTC]

i like fog, i like it realy much!

great shot!

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sairah [2004-02-23 09:27:02 +0000 UTC]

beautiful

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buildingclimber [2004-02-23 09:14:59 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful.

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taramara [2004-02-18 23:22:16 +0000 UTC]

Nice shot you have here !

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MrChippy [2004-01-19 17:13:12 +0000 UTC]

pretty work

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eswendel [2004-01-17 17:49:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice composition. Autumn's darkness is really present. You have also placed the branches nicely. Well done.

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raumzeit In reply to eswendel [2004-01-17 19:22:08 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the feedback from a professional like you. i appreciate that much...

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echfx [2004-01-01 22:48:33 +0000 UTC]

Ohh....spooky

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maclova [2003-12-29 08:16:28 +0000 UTC]

nล bel pics rule.

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cullenphoto [2003-12-22 09:36:49 +0000 UTC]

Extraordinary. I love almost all your work.

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athenafix [2003-12-09 14:29:11 +0000 UTC]

Cool!
I like this atmosphere...

Sara

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TheBlueUmbrella [2003-12-07 05:43:24 +0000 UTC]

Love it! It does look like a whisper too...!!

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napster4every1 [2003-12-06 18:50:29 +0000 UTC]

This is very cool. I like how the branches curve downwards; it's almost as though they are sad because it is foggy out. The border of the photograph is simple but good, however I personally believe the font is a wrong choice.

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cravingfordesign [2003-12-06 18:44:34 +0000 UTC]

Excellent fog capture, I always love the mood with photos like this, composition is just right with the branches hanging over and vanishing into the fog, well done

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midianithia [2003-12-06 15:28:45 +0000 UTC]

great photo!

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Mopa [2003-12-06 15:28:24 +0000 UTC]

Great picture! The fog creates a nice atmosphere

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skyking [2003-12-06 14:16:17 +0000 UTC]

Very cool image, Ramon. I love the way you have this cropped. Good work

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gitarrenklampfer [2003-12-06 13:47:45 +0000 UTC]

*sigh* if I wouldn't have had to do so much homework yesterday, I would have gone outside into the fog to make similar photos... I hope I'll have an opportunity again before it starts to snow ... I like the mood of the picture... dusty, sad, so november-like (although it's December already!)

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fireyblackrose [2003-12-06 13:46:55 +0000 UTC]

wow,this is beaitiful,you captured this image very well,I have to give it a +fav because it is just goregous.

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darkninja [2003-12-06 13:46:43 +0000 UTC]

WOAH! I love fog. this is a beautiful picture. awesome, brilliant,

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micheljr [2003-12-06 13:45:38 +0000 UTC]

oooooohhh ma mama my mymy

my God

much great

it's a pity it's not a stock picture i'd like to mak a wallpaper with this one

well done

cheer

michel

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bodyart [2003-12-06 13:44:01 +0000 UTC]

Great capture!

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