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RiverSpirit456 — SR Comic: Pg 63
Published: 2018-11-16 06:00:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 20727; Favourites: 526; Downloads: 21
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Hope you like it!Pg 64:
Pg 62:
Pg 1: SR Comic: Pg1 *Redone*
Original version (for those who still want to read/compare the old pages, I won't delete them) : Scarlet River: Pg 1
Written Version: Scarlet River P1 The moon was a sliver in the sky, only dimly shining on a winter night. Darkness clung to the snow-covered forest below; deep shadows lying beneath the bare, black branches. Through thick swathes of snow a young cat struggled forward. Her head barely cleared the surface of the cold, white substance, and her brown, silver-striped coat was plastered to her sides, revealing a jutting ribcage. She had been running for many suns and moons now, relying on instinct and a darker resource...one that the kit tried hard to ignore.
She took another faltering step, her paws numb. I have to get help. She thought faintly. Her next paw-step slipped, and she fell into the icy drifts, weakly shivering. Through half-closed eyes, she stared up through the bare arms of the trees. The sky was dark and clouded, the claw-like moon half covered. She struggled to stand, but there was no strength left in her thin, bony le
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Sad that he can't help, but I'd do the same.
No point in risking Clanmates' lives against a foe miles away, especially during winter.
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It is fair. Lightstar is NOT being selfish.
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Poor River. So devestated and sad. But Lightstar is a very good leader; though she feel sympathy for this stranger, she is putting her clan first.
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dats sad I feel bad
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River just looks shocked at the dismissal here. Lightstar has a point... Since its nearing a time that she needs her warriors the most, and try to put them against a enemy she doesn't know anything about, she has to think of their lives as well.
" I have always depended on the kindness of strangers. "
Tennessee Williams
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Those people who read the written version probably weren’t as surprised by this as those who didn’t
say me if you’ve read the written version
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Meee. But seriously, I agree!
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Haha and those of us who read the original (text of) scarlet river know what’s going to happen
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I still remember every main point of the story
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I know this doesn't fit here, but what' s about the Scourge AMV?
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At first glance I thought this was some sort of abstract meme cause my tired brain was thinking of Animal Crossing when I read New-Leaf and ignored the rest of the sentence sdfkjksklakvjdlsöv
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One does not simply hop on over to somebody's house and ask, "hey mate can you help with this problem I've got over in Europe"
nope
doesn't work like that
So River, it'll be okay
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logical and honestly what did you expect that a clan would just try and help a stranger with a dangerous task far beyond their territory
i mean would you go through the trouble of helping a stranger?
if so your a nice person but a gullible one and its usually better to not get involved in someone else's problem
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It realty depends, on a few factors.
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primarily the condition of your clan, the environment(leaf-fall), and if you do or do not have a moral outlook.
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Honestly river, what'd you expect? Lol this isn't a full comic/story based on you. Silly Kitty.
Oh wait
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