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Cover | Previous | Page 4 | NextEDIT: Fixed the speech bubbles for consistency.
Page four!
And more outside.
And look! A new character!
His name's Kir, if you can't read that panel, but I'm sure you can.
he's Sabbath's buddy.
But back to the lab at the end. :<
What's going to happen next!?
Btw, I'm going to be changing the lines so that they match the colors of the characters themselves. It gives it a softer look, so i'll be going back and switching it up with those ones.
Enjoy!
Valley of the Wind, Story, Characters & Art (c) *SUNgoddessOKAMI
Backgrounds (c) ~Munyei
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Ooh, I love the switch in perspective from the first two panels!!
And Kir is so pretty! I like how you did the wings.
Again, awesome job on Sabbath's expressions.
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Is it... is it not on hold then?
Anyways, lovely page! Might I suggest having some grass blades in front of Sabbath's hoof though? It looks a bit like he's floating without them. Otherwise quite lovely.
Munyei needs to make tutorials for her bgs though, yep. That is some epic mountain and lake there.
AND THE EVIL DOOM WALL HAS RETURNED.
Also, Sabbath makes cute faces.
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It's gonna be after the next page til I get a new computer.
I noticed that too. XD
She's already gone to bed for the night, but i'll point it out to her next time we talk. I got a few other things in the other pages to fix, too.
She was so tired working on it, she drew a bunch of blades of grass in the sky. I had to blur them out. lol
Yush, the Wall of Doom. I think I'll make a stamp. XD
I KNOW! I LOVE that panel. i have no idea how i drew him like that, but I love his face. X3
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Woot!
Hahaha I've done that before. XD
I like the stamp.
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