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SweetLittleVampire — Venice Nights

Published: 2012-07-30 22:39:57 +0000 UTC; Views: 1007; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 0
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Description My entry for ~DareenyY ’s BCS Opening Event

Horse: Amadeo
Breed: Venequia
Rider: Rebecca Shelbie
Discipline: Little Venice Flat Race

English:

“This dress...” Louis watched Rebecca who was busy with getting Amadeo ready for the race. They had commissioned him a special bridle that could be worn under his mask. The horse was turned with his butt in Louis’ direction, so the stallion was only facing Rebecca, who was already wearing her mask.

“Yes, I know”, she replied. “It looks like it must be impossible to ride with it, especially races. But I’ve tried it out; it’s far more comfortable than it looks, and it isn’t as heavy as it seems.” She fixed Amadeo’s mask and controlled if it was placed well. “At least I didn’t take real lace – it’s an old curtain.” She smiled and led the horse out of his box.

“That isn’t what I meant”, Louis replied. “I was quite sure you wouldn’t wear anything that would feel uncomfortable. It’s just...I have the impression I’ve seen a similar dress before.”

Becky smiled again. “Vincent and I’ve exchanged some sewing pattern lately. If I’m not mistaken, he referenced it on a dress he had seen in an anime. He thought with some modification it’ll look quite like the costumes of the Venetian Carnival. Could you possibly help me?”

She was about to mount the horse, which wasn’t so easy in that dress. The young man helped her to get into the saddle. “Wish me luck! We’ll make fifty-fifty if I win”, she said as they moved to the starting line.

The start went well. Little Venice was amazing to look at, although she didn’t really have time to take a closer look at it. The gems on the cavern’s roof sparkled like a million stars over her, and the rain soon covered her face. She was happy she didn’t wear any glasses – they would have been covered with droplets by now.

Although she knew that Amadeo was familiar with the streets and liked rain, she decided to go safety first. The Venequia was still a horse, and the possibility to slide and fall on the wet pavements was not impossible. The most important was to get to the arrival safe and sound – also because her costume didn’t allow a helmet. “I must be mad to take part in a race without a helmet”, she thought.

She soon found the flag with her stable emblem on it and returned to the arrival. Though it wasn’t really important for her to get the winning cup, she had to admit that she was eager to know how well they had made.


German translation will follow

Horse reference by ~LuDa-Stock
Pearl brush by ~flashtuchka
Lace brush by *redheadstock
Lace brush 2 by ~CourtHouse


Venequia breed © ~DareenyY
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Comments: 42

uniccin [2012-10-04 19:27:05 +0000 UTC]

wow! wunderschön, die gnazen details am kleid und... wow!!

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to uniccin [2012-10-04 19:28:26 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön!

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uniccin In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-10-04 19:36:25 +0000 UTC]

bitte ((:

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Meerli [2012-08-02 07:27:24 +0000 UTC]

Das ist krass ... OO
So viele Details und wie schön die Farben sind O___O

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Meerli [2012-08-02 16:13:48 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön. ^^
Normalerweise hab ich so meine Probleme damit, Nachtbilder hinzubekommen, weil ich oft die Farben verfälsche...
Hier hatte ich offenbar Glück. ^^

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Meerli In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-08-03 12:23:05 +0000 UTC]

Dafür nicht
Ich nenn' das nicht Glück, ich nenn das Können

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saphiraly [2012-08-02 05:31:07 +0000 UTC]

Boah ey, ich LIEBE deine Pics! Du kriegst das so wundervoll hin mit Licht und Schatten. und das OUTFIT!!!!!

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to saphiraly [2012-08-02 16:12:55 +0000 UTC]

XD Danke. ^^
Das Outfit hab ich mir von nem Anime abgekuckt.

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saphiraly In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-08-02 17:43:43 +0000 UTC]

Gernööö^^

Ja aber troootzdem^^

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Skyfaxi [2012-08-01 16:32:44 +0000 UTC]

Oh wow das Bild sieht dermaßen toll aus! Der Regen, die Perlen, das Kostüm, das Pferd.. das ALLES

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Skyfaxi [2012-08-01 16:37:27 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön!

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PanchKalian [2012-08-01 16:19:23 +0000 UTC]

Hammer :3

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to PanchKalian [2012-08-01 16:37:42 +0000 UTC]

Danke!

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DareenyY [2012-08-01 12:50:18 +0000 UTC]

Sehr schöne Story zum Pic!
Ich finde es bemerkenswert, wie die Charaktere sich in der Umgebung bewegen und wie sie sich verhalten! es zeigt, dass du dir einige Gedanken um Little Venice usw. gemacht hast! Ich bin begeistert x3

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to DareenyY [2012-08-01 15:11:00 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön. ^^
Na ja, ich versuch es halt immer ein bisschen anzupassen.
Hätte ich jetzt geschrieben, sie seien schnell wie der Wind durch die Gassen gefegt, wäre das meiner Meinung nach etwas unrealistisch gewesen.
Ich nehme zwar an, dass sich die Teilnehmer die Strecke vor dem Rennen ansehen konnten, aber Rebecca kennst sich trotzdem da nicht so gut aus. Und meine Freundin war mit der Schule in Venedig, und sie meinte, in verschiedenen Gassen ist es unmöglich, mit Highspeed da durchzurasen, sonst liegste im Kanal. XD
Und selbst wenn das Pferd die Stadt wie seine Westentasche kennt - es besteht immer Ausrutschgefahr auf nasser Straße.
(Übrigens - musst mal aufs Bild klicken, dann kannnst du auch die Steine an der Decke glitzern sehen. In der kleinen Version geht das leider etwas im Regen unter.)

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DareenyY In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-08-10 23:17:05 +0000 UTC]

Gerne^^
Hihi, das hat etwas! aber genau solche Details lassen ein Bild erst richtig zum Leben erwachen!
Jep, das konnten sie^^ auch alleine schon durch die Tatsache, dass ja jeder Teilnehmer in Little Venice logiert^^
Jaaah, diesen "pecial-Effect" hab' ich bereits entdeckt!! genau so sollten die aussehen x3

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Winxhelina [2012-07-31 21:26:33 +0000 UTC]

That looks amazing! That Rebecca sure is one hell of a sewer.... so.... what anime is that dress from? It looks really gorgeous. I also love her cape and mask and the rain looks so realistic! The background is gorgous too - makes the perfect atmosphere. So - did Rebecca win the race?The horse is beautiful too. Just gorgeous

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Winxhelina [2012-07-31 21:33:21 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!
I'ts from Trinity Blood, this one → [link]
I don't know if she'll win, the event ends on August 31st.

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Winxhelina In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-08-01 21:40:59 +0000 UTC]

OHh I see. Good luck

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Kabuki-Princess [2012-07-31 15:30:41 +0000 UTC]

Well done. Applause

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Kabuki-Princess [2012-07-31 16:41:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

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Jian89 [2012-07-31 10:44:37 +0000 UTC]

amazing

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Jian89 [2012-07-31 12:22:33 +0000 UTC]

Thank you.

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HaflingerLady [2012-07-31 05:49:58 +0000 UTC]

Wow, das ist so genial geworden, die Stimmung der regen und diese Details. *schwärm*

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to HaflingerLady [2012-07-31 06:07:56 +0000 UTC]

Dankeschön!
Ich dachte schon, ich werde gar nicht mehr fertig damit, schließlich ziehe ich bald um.

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HaflingerLady In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-31 06:18:58 +0000 UTC]

Ach du auch, bei mir gehts am Wochenende auch los mit Umzug.

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to HaflingerLady [2012-07-31 06:28:37 +0000 UTC]

Ja, und ich ziehen am 14. August zurück nach Luxemburg - wird ein 600-km-Umzug.

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HaflingerLady In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-31 06:30:31 +0000 UTC]

Da habt ihr ja ordentlich zu tun, mein freund und ich wechseln nur den Stadtteil.

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to HaflingerLady [2012-07-31 06:33:51 +0000 UTC]

Na ja, Nachtis Studium in Hamburg ist beendet, und meins beginnt am 17. September an der Uni Luxemburg.
Insofern gibt es keinen Grund, hierzubleiben.

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HaflingerLady In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-31 06:35:43 +0000 UTC]

Das stimmt wohl, dann wünsche ich euch mal alles Gute und ein paar kräftige helferlein zum Möbel schleppen.

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to HaflingerLady [2012-07-31 06:37:08 +0000 UTC]

Werden wir haben! ^^
Soll dir von Nachti sagen, dass sie deine Note bekommen und gelesen hat.

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HaflingerLady In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-31 06:41:25 +0000 UTC]

Danke.

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Shiryuka [2012-07-30 22:47:44 +0000 UTC]

OMG
again!!!!

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to Shiryuka [2012-07-30 22:49:49 +0000 UTC]

I've worked my butt off on this one, though.

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Shiryuka In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-30 22:52:12 +0000 UTC]

it seems, yep, in hundreds

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BournetwynKennels [2012-07-30 22:46:01 +0000 UTC]

This is gorgeous!

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to BournetwynKennels [2012-07-30 22:47:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you. ^^

Oh, I'm owing you a stable emblem, right?
I charge for them now, but if you're still interested in getting one, I'll do it for free as we agreed.
Sorry you have to wait so long.

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BournetwynKennels In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-30 22:52:53 +0000 UTC]

don't worry bout the wait, you did say it would take a while xD I'm not bothered about the wait.
But yes a stable emblem, I am still interested, with the new name Dark Horizons and colour scheme red and black

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to BournetwynKennels [2012-07-30 22:56:11 +0000 UTC]

I'm trying to remember wgat exactly you've wanted - a horse, a Great Dane, and what was the third animal you've mentioned?

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BournetwynKennels In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-30 23:04:27 +0000 UTC]

an English pointer, great Dane and a horse

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SweetLittleVampire In reply to BournetwynKennels [2012-07-30 23:06:19 +0000 UTC]

Ah yes, the Pointer. Thanks!

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BournetwynKennels In reply to SweetLittleVampire [2012-07-30 23:08:20 +0000 UTC]

No problem

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