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Published: 2013-03-16 19:47:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1342; Favourites: 48; Downloads: 4
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That is THE END OF CHAPTER ONE RIGHT THERE! Aaaaaaaaaaawwww yeeeaaaaaahhhhhhh!!
I started this chapter in September. That's 30 pages over six months, and it was basically all exposition. I... don't even know what to think about that :^I
But the good news is chapter two will have way more action! It's also going to be from Roma's perspective, so I don't have to draw Levi's dumb hollow face anymore.
I'm excited :^D
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Immediately 'Little Talks' started playing like an outro to these pages like an ending theme for an anime XD
And YAY! *Confetti sprinkles* You've done it Noah, you've done it! Chapter one!
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HNNNNGGGHHH YOU'VE CAUGHT UP TO ME
I WAS UNPREPARED FOR THIS
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Just to say I have loved the intro and this chapter, the colors are gorgeous and the story more than appealing^^' Keep up the good work, this is EPIC and made of gold!!
*Hermi-kΓ΄***
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Thank you so much! I'm really glad you read it durr hurr
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I'm so glad you color these! The artwork is great and the vibrant colors really draw your attention, plus, the storyline so far is really well planned out and intriguing! I'd love to see more, so I'm looking forward to the next chapter/page. Keep up the good work!
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Thank you! I was worried the storyline was too rushed so that's a relief :^D
I'll probably start chapter 2 in about a week.
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I just read all of these. I love this comic and I can't wait to read more.
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Thank yoooouuu!! That's relieving because I was worried about it being incoherent as a story OTL
I'll probably start chapter 2 in around a week.
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I can't wait to read it.
The story sucked me in right away, and your style of drawing is incredible!!!!
Very beautiful. I look forward to more of it.
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SO STOKED for chapter two. This one was exposition-y, for sure, but it established a lot of important things and we finally got to meet the owlcatgriffins!
Can't wait for Roma! It's been so long that I kind of forget who he is...
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I AM SO STOKED TOO! I think exposition is kind of mandatory for a story to make sense, but now I am done with that and I can move on to something interesting aawww yeeaah
Roma is a girl Anna, gosh. >:^(
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I don't even want to think about the work you put into that! Good job!
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NO
NO PLEASE
IT IS TOO ORIGINAL AND EPIC TO STOP
you're my new idol eve ~
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uh- oh... i went ahead and shared the link to your homepage on facebook, telling people to read it and share it and to KEEP IN MIND who the creator of the comic is
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Thank you! You're so nice, seriously
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so AWESOME!
the inking and color go so well together, the story is just as rich as the illustration..
you need to print this. go ahead and use the PR you get through your DD right now, keep the fans there and print and sell them yourself at first, so if you prove you can sell them and if you have a massive fanbase, you can go and make it big!
for one this story so much deserves to be spread far and wide and also it would be great if you make some money, so you feel rewarded and you can focus on going on with it because every page is worth while doubly.
sorry for getting so eager... i just think this has so much potential - the potential to become a great and famous childrens story, like, for example, "Where the Wild Things are" (german it is "Wo die wilden Kerle wohnen" and it was one of the most fabulous and favourit children stories i had, that ~17 years back, when i was about the age for it to be read to me.)!
Hope you can seize opportunities and make this big.
and donΒ΄t let anyone cash out on you, keep profits to yourself and make more beautiful pages with it, GO, GO! 
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Aaahhh thank you, that is a lot of feedback!
I don't know if I can print right now because I'm only like 15% through the story, but I am going to make this into a book eventually. It will happen. I'm so flattered that you think it could be a children's story, just....hdfksjsfdjk thank you
I hope I can make Shambles as successful as you talked about. Thanks for the comment, it was really motivating :^D
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Copper Goblin is a great name for (I'm guessing it's) a tavern.
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Why thank you I was afraid it was too cheesey, welp.
(Sorry for the late reply again...)
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I made a list of tavern names once... All I remember was the Cat and Sacking, because that was the only one I ever used.
(Also anybody talking to me is the last person who should be worrying about replying late.)
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Got here through the DD, and I LOVE your artwork. And so far I like your story too.
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Thank you! I'm glad you like it :^D
(And sorry my reply is late.)
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me too! I wish my comics looked this amazing:[link]
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Great job so far! I can't wait for the next pages
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Your style is so unique and beautiful. I had a fun time reading your pages, and I know I would still have fun reading the rest that's still to come. You are an extremely talented person...and I have yet another rival added to my list.
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This was just great! Can't wait for sequel!
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Thank you!
I'll probably start chapter 2 in about a week
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I'll patiently wait, and definitively enjoy it! 
Take your time, make following parts perfect, just as it were the ones until now!
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Oh damn I got a dd!! Fffdfsj I didn't even know, whoa
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Okay this should NOT get a DD, it's just one and a half pages ahaha
But thank you!!
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haha so humble, congrats!
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