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Published: 2009-06-28 06:24:53 +0000 UTC; Views: 3654; Favourites: 47; Downloads: 63
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Description Original here , from 2004.
Redone version here , from 2009.

Entered into Category 1 ( All Digital Paintings, Drawings, Pixel Art, 3-Dimensional, Vectors, and Vexel images) of the Kick Your Own @ss Contest.

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The obvious way in which I've improved is that I've learned to paint in a semi-realistic style. I have also admitted the need for a background in my art so that Kenshin is no longer floating in a formless void, and I have also started to actually research things, so that he is now holding his sword properly for the moment when he is about to draw it and his hakama and kimono resemble real ones slightly more than in the original.

What I still need to work on: anatomy. Oh, he looks good, until you look more closely and realize his head isn't sitting quite properly on his neck, and that his stance is weirdly unbalanced because his feet aren't under him., ironically something I managed to get correct in the original. XD And hair. *sigh* It's not the spiky bush Kenshin's wearing in the first picture, instead it has improved to be a tentacular mass. And because I made the lanterns too bright, the focal point is on them, instead of Kenshin's Battosai eyes as it ought to be. Ah well. I also need a better control of color. The original looks better in that regard, but that's only because I eyedroppered the colors from a screencap of the anime back then. I'm still better with black and white than color.


(The contest category closed 24 hours early, so this is in Fan Art. )

ETA: They moved it into the proper category! Yay!
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Comments: 9

hyenacub [2009-07-24 01:27:26 +0000 UTC]

This is awesome...what a difference! I love that realistic style...that's what I want my art to look like! Best of luck! The background, lighting, and shadows are awesome, too.

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i-go-ru [2009-06-30 10:01:35 +0000 UTC]

i like the first one better since its more anime...and i love Kenshin in anime! XD but dont worry since your new version is really awesome too! i wish i can color the way you color! and the details are very fine with the new version! nice job!

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telophase In reply to i-go-ru [2009-06-30 14:07:54 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!

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BrokenEver [2009-06-29 11:33:17 +0000 UTC]

Mistakes or not, this shows what a drastic difference in style you've gone through. Very cool to see.

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telophase In reply to BrokenEver [2009-06-29 18:41:05 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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kokoronagomu [2009-06-29 00:48:44 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful!! and although i'm not even nearly as talented as you (and since i'm really old, i don't hope to be) i have a suggestion or two.

you could claim that his stance is because he is in mid pivot-- and if the lanterns are too prominent, pull them back farther. um, isolate him on a layer and reduce the remaining image by a couple percent (making it seem farther back) and blur the edges darkening the background a bit except just around the lanterns so they're just glowing and slapping him back on top. it isn't like the lanterns have electric lightbulbs in them, they're just oil/kerosene lights or candles, they wouldn't give off quite as much light.

i shouldn't give crit/advise to my betters but after reading your comments...
besides-- i'm one of those cranky old ladies who are always butting in, complaining and stuff

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YukiH [2009-06-28 08:33:34 +0000 UTC]

Omg, you too!? I entered also... I'm so scared. :S

I loved Kenshin and Hakusho except for the newer episodes of Hakusho when they stopped adding background music and effects and it became boring.

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telophase In reply to YukiH [2009-06-28 19:03:31 +0000 UTC]

I made my mind up to enter at the last minute, basically. XD

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YukiH In reply to telophase [2009-06-28 20:40:01 +0000 UTC]

I found out last minute, I entered last minute... I hope I don't get bamboozled by the rules.

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