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kabeerk [2015-02-08 10:51:10 +0000 UTC]
That was.....interesting.
The following is the opinion of someone else after reading this chapter:
"OMG yess this chapter is awesome~ And this is a good ending, with Peter ending the Monster within himself and trying to stop Nightmare. I guess the bad ending would have been him killing the squad and defying Nightmare, then destroying the world or something. This sounds like the ending a majority of my characters would hope for, except that I keep them alive to make them suffer. I guess the lack of violence made this chapter seem too quiet, but that's good because of how much it focused on the dead bodies, making this chapter seem more like it was mourning for the loss of life. Hopefully the epilogue will contain some serious bloodshed and some actual sadism, though it's a memorable story even without that"
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to kabeerk [2015-02-09 04:25:17 +0000 UTC]
Actually, the bad ending was him living in general. Because if he lived, then he WOULD have been locked up for this. There's no way in hell that the grieving families would have allowed Peter to go free, especially with the Beast still present in his head (even if not in control). In short, it definitely would have been the bad ending even if it wasn't as bloody as you'd have expected.
And yes, Chapter 13 really was just to let the dust settle and see the aftermath from the perspective of the outside world, to allow in a fresh point of view to see the ruins of Marianas and come to their own conclusions on what happened. Don't worry, though, the BuRNN Squad would have survived regardless; I have plans for Scarlet and his team. They will be appearing again in a later story...
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MarvelHero977 [2014-01-25 18:34:13 +0000 UTC]
I really want to know how the bad ending would have gone down now. But for my sanity it`s probably best that I don`t.
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crazynoggin In reply to MarvelHero977 [2015-06-16 01:37:19 +0000 UTC]
Eevee said that it was just Peter living in general.
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GigabyteDragon [2013-11-01 07:55:59 +0000 UTC]
*Jaw drops through to the center of the earth* If you get an award for this story, I honestly wouldn't be surprised...
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to GigabyteDragon [2013-11-01 19:02:37 +0000 UTC]
Yes. Oh, and by the way, this was the GOOD ending.
Because sadism.
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Rabbit-In-A-Bottle [2013-10-31 21:49:16 +0000 UTC]
*trying to process this all*
But....but.......but I like Peter...why'd he have to die? *goes to sit in the corner of confusion and sadness*
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Rabbit-In-A-Bottle [2013-10-31 23:23:26 +0000 UTC]
Don't worry... There's still the epilogue, and you'll see Peter again. I promise.
...Also, would you hurt me if I told you that this was the GOOD ending?
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MarvelHero977 In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2014-01-25 18:33:22 +0000 UTC]
We`ll see Peter again?
...that doesn`t sound like a good thing.
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Rabbit-In-A-Bottle In reply to TheEeveeWarrior [2013-11-01 04:19:37 +0000 UTC]
I wouldn't hurt you, I promise~
Besides, SSoR has a good / bad ending anyways.
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Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2013-10-31 19:32:26 +0000 UTC]
Daaaaaaang, that was powerful! It's a shame Peter had to die, though. ;^;
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Tori-the-Eevee1234 [2013-10-31 19:45:56 +0000 UTC]
He's dead, yes, but so was Nightmare. First rule of my stories: death does not necessarily mean the character is gone.
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Elemental-wyvern [2013-10-31 19:16:14 +0000 UTC]
Damn...*Bows head* Rest In Peace Peter Cohen.
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TheEeveeWarrior In reply to Elemental-wyvern [2013-10-31 20:22:36 +0000 UTC]
Well, there's that, plus the whole thing from the group collab. That said, I think you'll like how Peter's story ends.
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