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Published: 2012-03-17 14:56:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 822; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 7
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I'm Sorry thaT I m de the right choice. i'm sorry that i Let you go. i waited too Long to teLl you and ow it's too late. nOw you haVe to wait for me. i o ly neEd three more Years nd then we can be tOgether again. please wait for me. i won't be mUch longer!Related content
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that be one of 'em! There are 4 secrets in the deviation and 2 in the comments!
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I meant to say description. silly me!
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Very interesting work. I like it, it's emotive and carries a concept. Great visual poetry ^^
-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate
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I be workin' on a new bit of visual poetry along the same lines as this one, but it may take a couple of days 'cause I be actually creating it instead of makin' it digitally.
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Arrr then I look forward to it my dear friend. As you up your view count, bounty goes up ;3. It's the reason we strive as pirates to be known so that we can spread ourselves across the world.
THAT is our adventure ^^
-Captain Chenbeard the Pirate
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The pure feeling demonstrated in these words, both literal and hidden, have earned you a spot on my list of people to base myself on.
Fanstatik work !
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thanks. I appreciate the feedback. I honestly think that this is my best work so far
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even the words in the DESCRIPTION count.
Can this be any more expressive?
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not as long as I'm writing it. It's all that I thought of.
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THX. please share as well. I appreciate feedback and veiws
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i showed it to some friends, and also on fb and twitter 
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THX. I put alot of my heart into it. maybe that,s why it's so broken...
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Hehe, it's funny actually!
I have a piece EXACTLY like this one in my gallery!
Yin-Yang based concrete poetry, only without the whole "Broken" thing to it!
XD
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I'm gonna have to find that one in your gallery now. the brokenness is important to mine, though.
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Wow, incredible work!
I do concrete poetry as well, and have to know!
What kind of file did you use to put this up, and how did you create it?
It's just so hard to create concrete pieces using Stash!
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hah. beleive it or not I just used Word and then took a screen shot and cropped it. it took forever to get these things lined up, though.
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You... are a genius!
I can't believe I never thought of that!
Like I said, I write concrete poetry too... I know the hell you go through lining your work! XD
But seriously man, thanks... You have just made my life so much easier!
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no problem. thanks for the appreciation!
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Holy **** man, I just noticed the hidden message!
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there's a few hidden things.
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