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Published: 2008-08-09 23:31:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 963; Favourites: 20; Downloads: 12
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Description About: Love has to be built on friendship and trust, without that love doesn't have a chance, pretty soon the foundation will start to come tumbling down.
Poem by: VisualPoetress

Abandoned Building by Falln Stock: [link]
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Comments: 44

Lauraest [2008-09-14 13:38:09 +0000 UTC]

I love the sentiment. It's so true

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VisualPoetress In reply to Lauraest [2008-09-15 02:03:40 +0000 UTC]

Thank you it is true my dear... need that foundation for a strong relationship.

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FireOpal14 [2008-09-14 10:46:26 +0000 UTC]

If only I could express myself in words the way you do . . . what a gift you have

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VisualPoetress In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-09-15 02:01:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Rhonda

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FireOpal14 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-09-15 18:16:39 +0000 UTC]

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DragonsChest [2008-09-14 04:37:35 +0000 UTC]

Excellent poetry from the love mistress...

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VisualPoetress In reply to DragonsChest [2008-09-14 04:41:18 +0000 UTC]

Thank you dear the next one will make you blush .. I am asking the photographer to use this photo with my poem: [link] I have used her stuff before under her other previous acct.

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DragonsChest In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-09-14 04:43:20 +0000 UTC]

Looks like fine dining to me!

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VisualPoetress In reply to DragonsChest [2008-09-14 04:44:11 +0000 UTC]

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DragonsChest In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-09-14 04:47:45 +0000 UTC]

I haven't had sex in almost 1 and a half years. Even my Cats wont come near me!

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VisualPoetress In reply to DragonsChest [2008-09-14 04:49:21 +0000 UTC]

Me too .... I am saving myself ewww on the cats

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DragonsChest In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-09-14 04:53:15 +0000 UTC]

Well I wouldn't do anything with the little buggers, but their taking no chances until I unsave myself

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creativemikey [2008-09-14 04:35:49 +0000 UTC]

This one has so many hidden meanings

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VisualPoetress In reply to creativemikey [2008-09-14 04:42:47 +0000 UTC]

To me the foundation the next time around, will be based on friendship, love and trust.

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M-I-R-I-E-L [2008-08-16 23:03:48 +0000 UTC]

You have such a way of expressing the poignancy and hope of life, Michelle!

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VisualPoetress In reply to M-I-R-I-E-L [2008-08-16 23:22:54 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetie ... when I first decided to write I decided that I would do poetry/prose/erotica that is about love in its many forms. I look deep inside my mind and heart when I write and I know that there are others in the world that share the same feelings on one or many of my poems. I not only write to help release emotions but I know maybe my poems my help someone someday or inspire them too.

Thank you for your support of my work

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M-I-R-I-E-L In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-19 00:16:18 +0000 UTC]

You most definitely express what people feel too and I think it's wonderful to be able to touch other hearts/minds, hon!

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VisualPoetress In reply to M-I-R-I-E-L [2008-08-19 02:38:24 +0000 UTC]

Thank you sweetie

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Princessjilleke [2008-08-13 18:10:00 +0000 UTC]

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VampireButterflyMel [2008-08-11 22:54:03 +0000 UTC]

the sad truth about many relationships

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VisualPoetress In reply to VampireButterflyMel [2008-08-12 01:48:16 +0000 UTC]

It sure is hun

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VampireButterflyMel In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-12 02:14:22 +0000 UTC]

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Ricardofantasyart [2008-08-11 03:51:09 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful work, Querida! Painful & sad, but so true of far too many strained relationships.

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echochina [2008-08-10 17:40:10 +0000 UTC]

hugs to you michelle

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colacandy [2008-08-10 11:16:20 +0000 UTC]

neglection of each other sucks can result in death of a unloved small new born baby very damaging trait

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TraceyAnn23 [2008-08-10 11:09:51 +0000 UTC]

wow, thats really good

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VisualPoetress In reply to TraceyAnn23 [2008-08-10 20:10:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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TraceyAnn23 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-11 06:34:16 +0000 UTC]

any time for you!!

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Aussie-Blonde [2008-08-10 09:22:04 +0000 UTC]

well written and yes lots of lovely love is coming your way ive heard its u who is gonna be worn out

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VisualPoetress In reply to Aussie-Blonde [2008-08-10 20:09:47 +0000 UTC]

Giggle that would only happen if I was tired... haha

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Aussie-Blonde In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-11 04:45:03 +0000 UTC]

well the man himself says u are in for it but i set him straight dont u worry and i told him he is in for it

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mirator [2008-08-10 05:54:10 +0000 UTC]

So true!

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VisualPoetress In reply to mirator [2008-08-10 05:58:06 +0000 UTC]

It sure is hun

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meljoy68 [2008-08-10 05:29:40 +0000 UTC]

Phoenix. You rise from the rubble and make a stronger better you. It takes guts to try again, and I give you huge props for daring to go for it!! You'll soar.

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VisualPoetress In reply to meljoy68 [2008-08-10 05:40:19 +0000 UTC]

I learned a valuable lesson when my mom was passing on, life is too short to be unhappy and unloved. I may be 44 to be in a few weeks, but I still have a lot of love and happiness still ahead. I am gonna make the 2nd half of my life happy and finally have contentment in my heart.

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meljoy68 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-10 05:49:12 +0000 UTC]

Amen to that. !!!

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AussieSteve1961 [2008-08-10 03:21:22 +0000 UTC]

nice poem and pic Michelle....

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VisualPoetress In reply to AussieSteve1961 [2008-08-10 05:45:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Steve

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AussieSteve1961 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-10 06:27:53 +0000 UTC]

pleasure M

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Lauraest [2008-08-10 01:54:52 +0000 UTC]

So true

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VisualPoetress [2008-08-10 01:36:05 +0000 UTC]

Yep 21 years of misery is over, I can so appreciate a good love from my man Rich

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FireOpal14 [2008-08-10 00:17:09 +0000 UTC]

This time it's completely different for you. Sad words . . . but oh so much happiness to come!

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VisualPoetress In reply to FireOpal14 [2008-08-10 01:39:56 +0000 UTC]

So true I am ready for some good loving and of course to give good loving too

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FireOpal14 In reply to VisualPoetress [2008-08-10 01:46:34 +0000 UTC]

I would think so . . .

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