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dev102 [2019-01-07 17:27:49 +0000 UTC]
Can you send me the link to your story it seems really interesting.
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Davinci975 [2018-07-01 04:03:44 +0000 UTC]
did you use a base
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ConMan21 [2014-08-03 20:06:05 +0000 UTC]
I just thought I'd share this...my Batman OC villain:
An immigrant from Romania, the land of the vampires, was an honest, hardworking and sympathetic person(22 years old).
He came to Gotham to meet with someone.He received a certain letter from that person...a letter that honestly shouldve never been delivered or received.
Our hero was a bit of a loner and at times he wished not to deal with anyone whether a friend or a foe.He had a certain melancholic look in his eyes, one that showed the sadness he felt for others suffering,despite not doing anything.
BTW My OC's name is Radu Severen.
He had this ideal that even apart people should aid other people.
His profession:magician/master illusionist prodigy.
His mentality:that of a person who despite "two very different sides" thinks that all people are equal and have more in common than they think.Naively, he thought the same thing in good or evil's case(that these 2 sides were an illusion and that people should be friends.Punks and gentlemen together included).He might as well been a bishop.
After that letter was received his fate was about to change for the worst.He met the one who sended him the letter, a loan shark who wanted to discuss business with him.He heard about our hero and his performance and wanted his Mafia boss to hire him as an private entertainer for the occasional parties.My OC foolishly accepted the offer, not knowing that he will be bounded for life(the condition was skillfully hidden under a hidden sticky page.
Two years have passed(5 after Batman first made his vigilante debut) and my OC met a beautiful woman who was a famous singer in Gotham called Karla V.(SPOILER she once had ties with a rival Mafia gang.Hell, she was the grandaughter of one of the oldest Mafia leaders in Gotham's history(that died recently of cancer and was her only relative alive.The gang members didnt know who she was or what she looked like since she was abroad to her other relative[nonMafia ones])).The relationship between those two flourished(she didnt know that he was working part-time for the rival Mafia organization as a private entertainer.And he didnt know her relation to the Mafia) and they eventually got married in secret (since his family died in a fire when he was 4 plus his lonely habits..and less attention to himself.He hated attention unlike Riddler) and Radu received a pendant from her as a gift, a pendant that had her Mafia family initials.They had two kids Ana and Vlad.Unfortunately tragedy struck when he started getting in debt and when his monthly payment(since the gangsters were party animals) from his employer hadnt arrived he started to become a bit agitated.He waited three more days...no answer.He then forced himself to use the magic(obtained from birth) he once learned to teleport to the Mob Boss's house where his magic things were(via contract).A guy spotted him and warned him that he wasnt supposed to be here.He took his stuff and went back home taking note of what he said.Unfortunately, he dropped the pendant I mentioned and the guard noticed it.He then kept a careful eye on Radu and started checking more on his situation after informing the boss.One day one of the gangsters recognized her and planned an assasination attempt on Radu's family.It doesnt make it easy that on the same day Radu decided to change his job not knowing about the hidden condition.His family were gunned down while he talked to the boss.Radu overheard via radio what was going on and tried running to help them, only to be knocked out and beaten by his goons to the bone.He let Radu, a bloody mess now, stay alive as part of the families mercy saying that it wasnt personal, just that that girl was part of the rival gang(which wasnt true at all).It was the Sicilian accent that had costed her life.Radu went home running, a broken man, and saw a horrifying image.His children, sliced in half after being shot.And his wife...decapitated.All to send him a message(One of the hit men was a brutal serial killer that was an expert on mutilations).
In that moment...Radu snapped and became an indiscriminate killer machine in his madness.He thought everyone to be guilty and he wished that everyone should die with him(even those as indirectly responsible as possible)."All should die...there is no good or evil...those are but illusions...only death is the reality that we must face.As a Master Illusionist I will show you what real and whats not (juggles gun) THIS...is not real. (shoots gun) NOW THIS...is the reality we face...and accept it.I will not die...untill all of you face the same fate."
Even as an insane amoral villain he is pretty honorable and in his moments of sanity regrets what he has done,laments his family's loss and even without Batman's interference/brutal interrogations he turns himself in.Unfortunately when he becomes mad nothing stops him.No walls, nothing.He indiscriminately commits chaos when he doesnt come to his senses.He's nothing short of a dangerous loose cannon.And with magic he's invincible.Plus the serial killer got maimed via telekinesis arm ripping, and iron maiden.After that decapitation.His outfit is stilish.With a devious/cocky smirk, a bowler hat,grey pants, a cane,a pair of octagonal-rimmed glasses and a vest.All violet-colored.And a rose in his pocket chest(which can change into anything...even weapons).
This is one villain that doesnt want to be a villain.Interesting...
Also his name is The Illusion(or the Grand Illusionist as he sometimes calls himself).
He has respect for Batman when he's sane and regrets meeting him in these circumstances.When he's mad he's a bit more defiant and lethal.
He is unaffected by Poison Ivy's mind control & poisoning.Again...magic.
Mentions that he has more in common with Mr Freeze and sympathizes with him saying that his wife had a better fate than his whole family.
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spike234070 [2014-04-03 01:03:12 +0000 UTC]
now this is a character id like to see in action!!!!!!!!!
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LadyKitten789 [2014-04-02 09:44:26 +0000 UTC]
she is super awsome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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BlaineDaymon [2013-09-16 14:59:16 +0000 UTC]
must be nice create both the back story and art for an OC, i can only do the writing.
Any chance i could employ you to help me with the art of my own characters?
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Winxney [2013-09-15 16:48:26 +0000 UTC]
did u make this yourself or did u use a site? cuz its awesome
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Jinxed-Wolf [2013-09-14 11:51:37 +0000 UTC]
Hi I've been looking for great Oc's to use as characters for a new story on www.quotev.com/ and was wondering if I could use yours. If you can get back to me soon that would be great.
Also you will be fully credited, and I will provide a link to the story when it is uploaded.
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thisepicgirl12 [2013-02-08 00:57:46 +0000 UTC]
Do you do requests?
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KateChristmas [2013-01-10 18:16:44 +0000 UTC]
gosh i wish i could make stuff like this
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to KateChristmas [2013-01-22 21:39:22 +0000 UTC]
It all takes allot of practise and patience XD It took me pretty long to get here ^^
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Xoraan [2012-12-18 03:35:18 +0000 UTC]
Where's this story? Is there a link?
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GlimmeringAngel26 [2012-12-09 09:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Nice and I am also making my YJ OC and her name is Nightbreaker
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kutekeg [2012-08-30 00:42:38 +0000 UTC]
Nice
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youngyatie [2012-08-27 11:21:29 +0000 UTC]
Here's a look at my hero team called "H.E.R.O" ( (Hemisphere, Emergency,Response, Operation) tell me what you think [link] [link] [link]
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to youngyatie [2012-08-27 19:46:55 +0000 UTC]
Really? That's cool. Does the story take place within the YJ universe, or does it stand on its own?
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youngyatie [2012-08-26 14:40:27 +0000 UTC]
Wow! amazing character you got here!
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RodgerTheGayAlien12 [2012-07-16 17:11:15 +0000 UTC]
Have made a story about her yet. If so where can I find it, because I would love to read it.
~Thank you
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to RodgerTheGayAlien12 [2012-07-16 20:28:19 +0000 UTC]
Yes, I've just started, though it starts of from the very beginning so will first see her when she just joined the batfamily.
Here's the link: [link]
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criticU [2012-07-15 22:10:20 +0000 UTC]
can i ask some questions?
Is she related to Alfred the bultler in anyway?
how did she get her powers?
um.. the scar thing, can't it be used to relate her to her secret identity.
How is she so strong as well as fast? Lynx are not known for there speed, after all they can do only short bursts of 15-20 MPH. They are more known for their jumping ability. In which can jump up 12 or more feet in the air.
What kind of lynx is she based off of?
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-07-16 00:08:24 +0000 UTC]
of course ^^
No, she's not biologically related to Alfred. I suppose I forgot to put that up. Her parents died in a car accident when she was about 5/6, a year later she's sneaking around Wayne mannor stealing food in her lynx form. At that time she rarely used her human form, though was able to understand human language. Alfred took her in after she got attached to him.
The source of her ability is that her uncle, who's a scientist in Russia, used her for one of his experiments. When he thought nothing had happened he left. Coming to visit every year to see if anything changed. Nothing did until the accident. Her uncle has been trying to find her ever since, since her body was never found. Which won't be told in the story untill she's active as Prowler. Her DNA was sort of mixed with that of the Eurasian Lynx (Lynx, Lynx).
Yes it would, but she refrained from covering it as it is a symbol to her. By the time she becomes Prowler she already is blind in one eye, and at school she's known for being clumsy and not phisically fit. The link could be made and in the story some people had suggested it, but think it's impossible for someone as Elizabeth to be Prowler.
She's not that strong? Not more than any other girl who's at their phisical peak. Though she is very fast but has a very low stamina. She's quick with reflexes and sprints.
I hope these answers were sufficient ^^ If not, I wouldn't mind answering more
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-07-16 09:12:54 +0000 UTC]
I see, but how did she get around teh house if the bat fam owns dogs? In one way would Alfred really allow a girl to stay with him or more like batman allow it?
oh okay. does her uncle not care about your oc? And what made him want to use her the first place?
not really, i mean superman all he has to do is wear glasses, and lex luthor had already found a connection between clark and superman but his own moral just refused to let him acknowledge the fact. (this happened in teh comics)
Sorry the view on the stats look like she is stronger than that. Her stats show she is around miss martian strength. Both artimas and Robin seem weaker than her. Andd her speed is like at the max in my view no offense, and she is not really as fast as superboy or Kid Flash.
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-07-16 14:14:16 +0000 UTC]
Okay, the dog part, I didn't know off. But still, the lynx is known for sneaking around and stalking prey. Dog's have a great sense of smell, so they'd be able to sniff her out, though I doubt they'd be able to find her before she's gone. (I knew about ace though )
And yeah...I thought about that as well...but then again she has a bit of the same backstory like Dick, with no parents, (though not killed) and I doubt she'd be able to live a good life as a lynx on the gotham streets. So I didn't think Bruce would be against it if Alfred would want to adopt the girl.
Not caring are not the right words for it I guess. Her uncle (I still need to come up with a proper name and background for the dude) is a scientist. And science is his life, so when his company that is hiring him are about to fire him for lack in positive results he goes a little crazy. He first uses his wife as a testsubject, but it fails terribly. After that he used his ten year old son. The experiment proved to work with a kink here and there, but survived for a few weeks before dying. The DNA being too unstable. He went to visit his little sister, Elizabeth's mother, for christmas. Still working he figures out that the younger the subject the better the DNA would be able to accumulate to eachother. His sister, Dorothea, was still pregnant from Elizabeth. So he did the experiment on the fetus. (Precise details on how he did it is what I'm still working on)
Okay...so I guess the scar thing won't be much of a problem....?
I looked at it again and the ones from the team, and I have to agree. So I adjusted the speed and strenght.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-07-17 00:35:13 +0000 UTC]
Oh okay, i know cats are known to be agile so i guess in one way ace won't be able to catch her.
But dick was accepted because he need closure for his families murder. He also had skills that caught batman's eye. Bruce would be against having a girl because hes a paranoid guy. He didn't even trust superboy at first. And alfred is wouldn't want to endanger her, even if she did have powers.
But why would his sister let that happen, plus wouldn't the sister hear of the scientist murdering his wife and kid? And the police catch him or the government shut him down.
If you want, your choice, just get ready for some people with intellect to figure her identity. Though i wouldn't really think so, if people in young justice can't figure out superboys identity since all he did was flip his shirt.
I see then tell me when you do that.
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-22 20:19:55 +0000 UTC]
Hmm, I can't say I fully agree with you. Yes Bruce is a very paranoid character, but what about Jason? He took him in, yes to bring him on the right path and after a failed attempt at bringing him to a boarding school, but he still took him in. And then there's Tim, who found out the secret IDs of Bruce. Lynx is still very young and with her ability could easily be used for scientific research by someone who might not care about her. Maybe my logic makes no sense, but I doubt Bruce would send her away and into more danger.
The company did want to go public with what happened a secret government organisation responsible for meta-human research, blackmailed them into keeping their mouths shut. Branch 16 then offered the uncle a job at their laboratory.
Branch 16 is something I came up with for a different story, but her story and the other take place in the same universe so to speak.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-08-23 02:52:32 +0000 UTC]
actually another reason he took jason in was because he was kinda careless, and thought he needed a robin after dick moved on also he was impressed with jason from an event. (btw the boarding school was a crime school teaching kids how to do crime and stuff) and tim because dick told bruce to take him in as the new robin. and look at colin wilkes, he got infected with fear gas that could make him into a giant monster. but all batman did was send him to the hospital. bruce would probably send her to more capability hands, possibly black canary, wild cat, etc.
the company didn't want to go public on not hiring the guy? or having nothing to do with him experimenting on his wife and child. and i seriously wonder how he was able to experiment on his sister cause i don't think his sister would even trust him.
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-23 12:41:18 +0000 UTC]
I knew about the boarding school being a crime school. Anyway, so yeah, I understand for Bruce letting Alfred take lynx in doesn't make much sense. But it's still Bruce's first year as the batman, so I don't think he knew all those heroes then. (I could be horribly wrong though, since I've never read any comics just the internet wikis and some movies and shows.) And about Colin, there wasn't much Batman could've done. A hosptial was a better choice. (again, I could be wrong since it's my interpetation of the situation)
In my story Branch 16 is a secret government organisation responsible for meta-human research, but has been compromised and was forced to go rogue. Now being responsible for assassinations under the supervision of the Light. And like I said, Branch 16 is blackmailing the company into not going public with the uncle doing illegal research and killing his family.
And why wouldn't she? He's never been anything than kind and maybe a little weird at times, but she doesn't know anything about what happened.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-08-23 16:56:27 +0000 UTC]
actually i'm pretty sure he met he met huntess before the justice league, and are you saying that he isn't raising robin, no dick grayson? and black canary, maybe he hadn't met her since he met her at the league as one of the founding members of JLA. well i'm not going to say anything about your opinion about colin.
so branch 16 somehow knows about the uncle and his rejection on joining the company?
wow than somehow he turned crazy? or is it that he was always having low moral standards and don't care about family? (and btw, don't any co workers, jobs manager what evers, call?)
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-25 13:00:06 +0000 UTC]
Uhm, not sure, considering this is based on the Young Justice version. And Huntress has a lot of different backstories, but I don't think in YJ she's connected with Batman like in the comics.
Wait, who did say didn't raise Dick or any of the robins? I know Alfred raised them as much as Bruce did. I'm not saying that.
Like I said, Branch 16 knowns pretty much anything when it comes to mutations/meta-humans etc. This man wanting to/being able to mix the DNA of a human with an animal, sure caught their attention.
Yeah, he turned pretty much crazy during his research. Mostly because he was scared of losing his job if he wasn't able to improve his research.
He pretty much stayed away from people, being more of a loner. Not that he acted unfriendly, but he preffered being alone and working in his own lab. So, I doubt co-workers or anything would.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-08-25 18:26:25 +0000 UTC]
but since huntress don't show up in yj you can either say that she is a vigilante, not in the justice league or she doesn't exist in this universe at all. but you said this when this is batman first year of being batman, i don't think he met dick grayson.
and they provide him the chemicals needed to do this? also than in a way the scientist is well known? and he did this too her when she was alive right? so why does she look human?
crazy i wouldn't use, maybe stressed out and desperate.
not the uncle but the child he used and his wife?
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-25 18:47:33 +0000 UTC]
Huntress does show up....she's Artemis her mother and retired villain.
And no he hasn't met Dick, yet.
Yes they did, and he was only known in the world of biogenetic science.
The girl? She was still a featus at that time, didn't I tell you that already, and she has the ability to change into a lynx. As a human the pretty much only link to it are her golden eyes, agility, speed and a more feral behaviour that comes forward when she starts school and often gets into fights.
Uh, they're pretty much dead by the time he visits his sister for the experiment.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-08-25 19:56:28 +0000 UTC]
wrong huntress that i'm talking about.
so in way he wouldn't adopt anyone, he's been known to be inhuman until dick became robin to make him more human.
but batman would know about him than.
no i think you told me she got the dna change when she was alive. also that if she got it when she was still in the womb, that would give her features a more cat like appearance will it not?
yes, i meant people who know the mom and son that was used as an experiment, wouldn't they call up to see whats happaning or something?
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-26 01:32:30 +0000 UTC]
Point taken, it's rather unlikely. However, the story's already been partly written, and I haven't had anyone complaining about it. So, not going to change it.
Who knows, could be. But Batman can't know about what really happened, only that the man used to be a Biogenetic scientist. Although I don't know why he would be interested in a scientist like him who lives and works in russia...
I'm pretty sure I told you when it was when she was in the womb, even telling you I wasn't sure how he did it like that yet. And why? There are allot of characters that change into an animal that don't have them. In YJ beast boy can even look exactly like a normal kid.
Okay, they probably would, but I'm pretty sure the man would just make up an excuse like his wife left him and took the son with her. It's not that uncommon to happen, even now there are parents who leave the wife or husband and take the child with them.
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criticU In reply to WickedCurlyFeather [2012-08-26 07:13:24 +0000 UTC]
just putting my point into this, plus personally i don't think they really care about details like that.
oh i thought he works in gothem...
really who? who in Dc have animal DNA and doesn't have the animal physical characteristic? btw, beast boy is green, also he doesn't exactly have a single animal he transform too. second he is the human's missing link technically. (and plus thats his human form (he also has the transforming ability) (second he kind of based off a monkey when he's normal form)
yes but wouldn't she call the school than? or tell her friends? not to mention the son's friends?
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WickedCurlyFeather In reply to criticU [2012-08-29 11:36:17 +0000 UTC]
Oh, I know. And honestly, your questions are kinda fun to think about and trying to answer them.
Well...I'm not sure in the DC universe, but I bet there are characters like that. And well...to think about, Vixen could get the abilities of an animal of choice, right? But I don't think she changed phisically either.
Okay, what? You lost me there with BB. All I know about him is a little from the TT and the most part on his origin of YJ. There he can look exactly like a normal kid, no green skin whats-o-ever.
Wait, who would call who? The sister or the wife? Cause if the wife just leaves without a trace, I doubt trying to call her will work if she doesn't want to be found.
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