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Published: 2006-10-29 19:05:14 +0000 UTC; Views: 695; Favourites: 14; Downloads: 4
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Description I am loved as if lost
and maybe only if

now I'm waiting on the anger
this distance has determined
the far away slow fade of friendship
not unusual
just not mutual

how quickly you slipped from my grasp
and I from your memory
(remember me?)
after everything I've done
dear
I wonder
were you ever really there?

but my only answers are
unreturned words
worries wasted
and a phone forgetting the sounds you make

then again

I suppose those are
evidence enough
for the both of us
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Comments: 38

fallenstar731 [2006-12-01 05:48:13 +0000 UTC]

This is deep..wow.

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YouInventedMe In reply to fallenstar731 [2006-12-03 20:10:27 +0000 UTC]



xo!

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jiolsmolimassunemo [2006-11-19 20:36:37 +0000 UTC]

i don't know if it's just the nature of the poems, the dreamy yet stark quality they can sometimes have, or just my own interpretations, but i find that they really how i often feel... your work is very good.

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YouInventedMe In reply to jiolsmolimassunemo [2006-11-23 07:29:47 +0000 UTC]

thanks
thanks
and thanks

a lovely comment/compliment(s)

xo!

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rojadawg [2006-11-15 04:59:58 +0000 UTC]

outta sight not outta mind...gone, but not forgotten. A sad, strong reflection, and well written poem.

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YouInventedMe In reply to rojadawg [2006-11-23 07:29:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you

xo!

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kbQ1had [2006-11-12 04:34:35 +0000 UTC]

you're doing it now.

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YouInventedMe In reply to kbQ1had [2006-11-23 07:29:04 +0000 UTC]

never.

xo!

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moosey88 [2006-11-08 21:28:45 +0000 UTC]

I those first 2 lines so much it hurts ^^

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YouInventedMe In reply to moosey88 [2006-11-23 07:28:52 +0000 UTC]

thank you
very
much

xo!

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beyondweird [2006-11-08 19:55:07 +0000 UTC]

My mate suggested this to me and just...wow...I love it

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YouInventedMe In reply to beyondweird [2006-11-23 07:28:37 +0000 UTC]

thanks!

and thanks to your friend as well

xo!

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ExeuntChasedByBear [2006-11-08 19:30:07 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely fantastic! I'm definately going to watch you, I love the half-rhymeing here, and the way you pair some words which look similar. Very good work.

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YouInventedMe In reply to ExeuntChasedByBear [2006-11-23 07:28:13 +0000 UTC]

Thanks a lot. Good to have you aboard, as it were.

xo!

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Sorrows-Song [2006-11-05 21:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Wow, amazing work, as usual. I love every bit of it.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Sorrows-Song [2006-11-23 07:27:50 +0000 UTC]

thanks

xo!

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ex-favilla [2006-11-04 03:05:46 +0000 UTC]


and Bach oratorios. Latin speaks, "let me know when I find me".

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YouInventedMe In reply to ex-favilla [2006-11-23 07:27:39 +0000 UTC]

you're an an entertaining little sprite, you are.

xo!

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amywalrus [2006-11-04 00:42:34 +0000 UTC]

i cant tell you enough how much i love everything you write. its always so fitting to what im feeling. amazing amazing amazing

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YouInventedMe In reply to amywalrus [2006-11-23 07:27:15 +0000 UTC]

thank you so very much

xo!

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bRoKeNgRiN [2006-11-03 23:18:15 +0000 UTC]

Very well done. I know what you mean about losing this kind of contact. I move around so much that I've lost a great deal of good friends. Well, I guess I'm just glad that I got to meet them and learn from them just as much as they learn from me. Thanks for reminding me of that.

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YouInventedMe In reply to bRoKeNgRiN [2006-11-23 07:27:00 +0000 UTC]

Thanks.
I do what I can
...though it's usually not much.

xo!

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parentheses [2006-11-03 04:49:20 +0000 UTC]

"unsual" needs another letter in it somewhere.

Great stuff though, it's a beautiful poem. Very moving.

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YouInventedMe In reply to parentheses [2006-11-23 07:26:25 +0000 UTC]

thanks!
and thanks for the catch!

edited.

xo!

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kurenaiXseito [2006-10-30 19:04:06 +0000 UTC]

I don't usually say much but that your poems are exactly how I feel. And they are. This one touched me a lot.

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YouInventedMe In reply to kurenaiXseito [2006-10-30 22:44:20 +0000 UTC]

thank you. it means a lot.

xo!

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ThePosse [2006-10-30 15:41:57 +0000 UTC]

i love this one...
thank you for putting this up for all to see...

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YouInventedMe In reply to ThePosse [2006-10-30 16:59:40 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

xo!

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kay-d [2006-10-30 03:14:25 +0000 UTC]

That end was... wow. I love this. I want to say more, but I can't. This was beautiful.

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YouInventedMe In reply to kay-d [2006-10-30 17:00:51 +0000 UTC]

you've said plenty.
thanks a lot.

xo!

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IrishHippiePoet [2006-10-30 01:39:35 +0000 UTC]

You are my idol.
the ending is perfect.

your artist's comments is poetry in itself.
<3

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YouInventedMe In reply to IrishHippiePoet [2006-10-30 17:02:11 +0000 UTC]

thank you very much.

xo!

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Garnet-43 [2006-10-30 00:50:29 +0000 UTC]

Sadness. Emptyness.

Nice poem, but very sad.

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YouInventedMe In reply to Garnet-43 [2006-10-30 17:01:35 +0000 UTC]

much obliged.

xo!

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alyryianis [2006-10-29 23:33:11 +0000 UTC]

holy shit, yes. you are amazing.

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YouInventedMe In reply to alyryianis [2006-10-30 17:01:55 +0000 UTC]

aw, thanks. thank a lot.

xo!

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incubustrav421 [2006-10-29 21:05:40 +0000 UTC]

i love the last part of this poem, it just gives reflective and maturation of life and love, great job

- ... out

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YouInventedMe In reply to incubustrav421 [2006-10-30 17:01:17 +0000 UTC]

thank you!

xo!

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