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ZackWriter23 [2016-06-07 05:27:01 +0000 UTC]
i told you not to eat that weird looking flower. but did you listen? noooo. >_>
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icepetsahesil [2014-07-25 22:13:08 +0000 UTC]
Please, Do Continue.
How did this happen? *squee*
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chill13 In reply to icepetsahesil [2014-07-26 00:30:39 +0000 UTC]
I'm not sure, but he's not doing too good. Any theories?
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icepetsahesil In reply to chill13 [2014-07-26 00:57:45 +0000 UTC]
Maybe he ate something that didn't agree with his stomach.
I gotta say I really love your art and the characters.
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chill13 In reply to icepetsahesil [2014-07-26 01:30:07 +0000 UTC]
Possible. He'll eat just about anything and sometimes the things he downs aren't compatable with human chemestry.
Thanks so much! I'm glad you're enjoying them.
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UniversesCollideInc [2014-07-24 10:40:39 +0000 UTC]
If Flyspurr weren't Flyspurr, he'd probably kill him once he's figured out what's up.
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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2014-07-24 15:07:53 +0000 UTC]
Yep. Once Flyspur actually realizes that he's hurt Rover WILL get quite an earful.
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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 15:12:32 +0000 UTC]
Indeed. Wonder if his race has anything that remotely equates to human swear words? Because if they do, Rover's probably hearing them all.
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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2014-07-24 15:23:11 +0000 UTC]
They don't, actually. The Jssfloon culture prides itself on politeness. But Flyspur can certainly dole out an intense lecture that doesn't NEED any swearing. The quick tail flicking, dark soul spots and tone of voice are plenty to let anyone know that he's upset.
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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 15:24:32 +0000 UTC]
Ah; that would be fascinating to watch I think. My mom would approve of their lack of swearing; she gets very upset when my dad or my brother swear.
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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2014-07-24 15:36:48 +0000 UTC]
Good for her! I don't like it when people swear either.
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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 15:48:43 +0000 UTC]
I'm okay with it when it's only under extremely circumstances. When I write, I tend to have a hierarchy among characters about how badly "pear-shaped" (expression borrowed from the British; means things have gone badly wrong). None of my heroic/likable characters curse normally but when things are going wrong and/or they're particularly angry, they do though the oaths are usually mild. Usually the characters will lampshade the swearing in a way similar to as in below.
Character A: *swears*
Character B: (thinking) Uh-oh. A's cursing; not sure I want to know what's gone wrong.
Or like this. The characters in question are fraternal twins and the male has managed to put their younger brother in danger; they were born in and spent their formative years in England.
Girl: (smacks her brother across the face) YOU COMPLETE ARSE! DO YOU HAVE ANY IDEA WHAT YOU'VE DONE?
Her sister-in-law (younger brother's wife): Girl...you just swore...you never swear...
Girl: I swear; just not often and besides your husband swears less than me.
Her brother: But she IS right; you swear so infrequently. Why now?
Girl: Because you're being a complete twit; do you even know what you've done?
I'll leave off here because I haven't worked exactly what proceeds and follows this conversation.
What do you think?
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chill13 In reply to UniversesCollideInc [2014-07-24 16:26:50 +0000 UTC]
In my opinion there is ALWAYS a way around swearing. I mean, look at Disney. They have bums, gangsters, really really evil villians, streetwise characters, smartmouthed characters (character types that probably would swear in real life, but in the movie you're never like "oh, they should totally swear". Because it's not needed to get the point across. Even very very angry chararacters don't have to swear to get angry across.) There's always other words or phrases that can convey a similar meaning but not offend anyone.
Like instead of using the 'A' word you could use 'moron', 'idiot', 'mush-for-brains'. Which actually makes more sense than calling someone a couple of pads of fat on the top of your legs.
Of course, it's your writing. This is just my opinion.
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UniversesCollideInc In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 17:05:56 +0000 UTC]
I agree that in general and whenever you can, using non-curse words is better. In the circumstance you reference, the hardest part of the interaction for the characters involved is that neither of them are completely right or wrong. The girl is furious because her twin went off to a special school for several years and never wrote back to her or their brother while her twin is mad that she never checked to see if he got the letters (he didn't due to mail interception).
And you're welcome to your opinion; it's very insightful.
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MerryellaBrandybuck [2014-07-24 08:16:49 +0000 UTC]
Oh, he certainly seems to be the type to act like nothing's wrong...
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artsytarts [2014-07-24 05:32:10 +0000 UTC]
Oh dear, that's not good. :/ Rover, don't be daft and see Dr. Cloud! It's only gonna get worse otherwise. Though I do understand his fear, with being seriously injured as a kid and all... Spending such a long time in hospital must've seriously traumatized him. But still... ouch. Poor guy. See Dr. Cloud. Like, right now.
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chill13 In reply to artsytarts [2014-07-24 05:53:14 +0000 UTC]
No, not good at all.
Rover: *tries desperately to look more annoyed than hurt* It's nothin'! I ain't callin no doctor. I got better things to do than sit on that blame table and be poked on prodded.
That is exactly where his aversion comes from. The Jssfloon doctors were very kind to him, but they didn't understand human chemestry and they were afraid to use too much anesthetic on him. So some of the things they did to try to help really hurt.
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chill13 In reply to artsytarts [2014-07-24 20:25:24 +0000 UTC]
No, he doesn't have any hard feelings. But you're right, many people in that situation would have ended up with a lot more issues than he has.
It's almost entirely subconscious. It's never "I don't want to be around you because your a doctor and I don't like doctors because..." , it's more like "Dude! I'm not sure why but I REALLY want to be somewhere else right now."
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artsytarts In reply to chill13 [2014-07-26 11:37:50 +0000 UTC]
Do the others make the connection or is it more a case of "nobody knows, but it's kind of worrying."
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chill13 In reply to artsytarts [2014-07-26 14:48:32 +0000 UTC]
Most of them just think he's stubborn. Nana can smell emotions so she knows how nervous and uncomfortable he gets but she doesn't have a clue why. Flyspur doesn't know for sure as it's not something Rover ever talks about but he suspects.
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LabelPerginu [2014-07-24 01:06:56 +0000 UTC]
Oyyy veyyy…That's just how I would react when I'm on a boat for over 45 minutes o~o I don't do well on boats…but in Rover's case, this looks more like pain than sickness. Looks like he fell on his side pretty hard, at least that's how I see it. Aww, poor guy :/
But sure, who isn't afraid of doctors? I'm terrified of hospitals and needles and all those scary tools o.o But Rover shouldn't have to feel degraded about admitting his injury or illness. If he keeps covering it up, the pain's not gonna leave.
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chill13 In reply to LabelPerginu [2014-07-24 05:25:29 +0000 UTC]
I've never had trouble with sea sickness but I've heard about it plenty and it doesn't sound fun. But, yes, Rover is certainly having a lot more trouble than being a bit nausious. A bad fall would explain the pain he's in now. He's really not doing very well.
Rover is far too proud for his own good. His heroes are all those macho cowboy's, remember. But, yes hiding something serious isn't a smart idea at all. I think his fear of doctors stems from being stuck in a Jssfloon hospital for so long after he was given his arm. And in school he was given a Jssfloon vaccine like all the rest of the kids in his class but it didn't sit well with his human chemical makeup and made him seriously sick.
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LabelPerginu In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 18:50:52 +0000 UTC]
Really? Well, you're blessed o.o In retrospect, it feels like someone's kneading the inside of your stomach and your head's full of water :I Yeah. At first, I thought it was nausea, but he would've been gripping his stomach, not his side Cx
Yes, he certainly is. Ahhh right right right. He looks up to them, and he doesn't want to be anywhere below weak or hurt, 'cause he sees his 'heroes' as undeniable beings. Awwww :C He must be petrified of doctors now. Like a cat trying to avoid getting his claws clipped.
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chill13 In reply to LabelPerginu [2014-07-24 18:59:35 +0000 UTC]
eeehh. Yes, I'm quite glad I don't deal with that.
And, of course, those old cheezy westerns an no where close to realistic when it comes to how much injury a guy can sustain and still be standing. And Rover feels that he's got to be just as tough as that. Anything less and he would be falling short of humanity.
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LabelPerginu In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 19:17:46 +0000 UTC]
Yeah, it's not a great feeling o~o
Ah yes, the old corny 'tumbleweed' westerns x'3 It's physically impossible for a human to withstand so many blows. It's like Batman! He doesn't have any superpowers, he's a human being, yet he still manages to survive anything. He's been stabbed, shot, and had his spine broken, but apparently, that's not enough to kill him...'cause he's Batmaaaannn...
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chill13 In reply to LabelPerginu [2014-07-24 19:21:41 +0000 UTC]
EXACTLY! What is with that, anyway? Who gave him 'superhero' status?
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LabelPerginu In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 20:40:07 +0000 UTC]
Am I right?! Really, I've always been left baffled by his brutal encounters. That last Batman movie REALLY left me hangin'.
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NeycuuRose1 [2014-07-23 23:11:25 +0000 UTC]
Omg alien sickness
so
so
so cool
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chill13 In reply to NeycuuRose1 [2014-07-23 23:32:25 +0000 UTC]
Oh, DEAR! What do you think it is?!
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Rebel-Rider [2014-07-23 23:02:53 +0000 UTC]
I have to wonder if any of his crew can smell blood. That could make some injuries hard to conceal.
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-23 23:25:26 +0000 UTC]
Nana certainly can. She has a downright uncanny sense of smell. Flyspur probably could if he was standing close enough. And possibly Nik, with his long feathery antennea, but he might not recognize it.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-23 23:29:16 +0000 UTC]
I'm guessing different species' blood smells pretty different. In my universe, it's generally about the same for any species with a spine.
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-23 23:36:01 +0000 UTC]
In my universe, yeah. There are all different types and they do look and smell different. Flyspur has been Rover's friend for a very long time so he would know exactly what it smelled like. But his nose works better underwater than on land so he would have to be standing pretty close before he could smell it.
I bet that comes in handy.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 00:06:32 +0000 UTC]
Interesting. I bet after a few of these incidents, Flyspur will educate everyone to know how to tell when Rover's hurt.
It does. It also means that predators on other planets would find something from a strange planet just as tasty.
Speaking of food, what are your different species' diets like?
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-24 00:16:33 +0000 UTC]
Flyspur is pretty decerning about the whole business.
Very interesting question. Flyspur is mostly vegetarian with the occasional insect or aquatic invertibrate to spice things up. Dr. Cloud's species are insectivores, but they can eat veggies if called upon to do so. Nik and Kit are nectar drinkers, and that only. They don't even have the mouth parts to chew solid food. Nana can and will eat just about anything as will Rover. Trigger eats metal shavings, which is why there is the occasional hole in the bulkheads.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 00:27:27 +0000 UTC]
That would make packing food for the crew a very interesting job.
Trigger must have strong jaws to manage that.
My creatures diets are a little less varied. Most of my creatures could find something to eat in a well-stocked human fridge. (Probably gross out the human when they went and ate a raw steak.) What's really ironic is my "Doc" is also into insects and small animals or fruit. They'd be able to discuss doctor stuff over a meal of grasshoppers, or whatever the local planet's equivalent is.
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-24 00:43:44 +0000 UTC]
Oh, that's very interesting! Insects grow pretty big on their planet, so even thought they are a fairly large species they can live on insects. Other places, however he might have to be satisfied with other small creatures.
I'm sure he'd like that! He is always up for a discussion with another doctor.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 01:35:25 +0000 UTC]
Doc's about the size of Nana so bugs are pretty easy for him even when they're traveling. He'll substitute with fruit or small animals, maybe even larger animals if he's really desperate.
Does Dr. Cloud do cybernetics or just the usual patch up stuff? My Doc is into cybernetics, to the point of going a bit overboard. (You mean you didn't want claws and eyes with an infrared setting?)
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-24 17:00:03 +0000 UTC]
Dr. Cloud is pretty skilled in most medical subject. So yes, he can certainly do cybernetics. But it's not his specialty.
Hey, who WOULDN'T want retractible claws or an infrared setting?
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 17:17:59 +0000 UTC]
With Doc, it's his specialty, or art as he considers it. With Dr. Cloud, he probably has a terrible time trying to keep up to date on all the different species' medical needs. Doc has it easier since my galaxy has less species and their bodies are normally closer to the same. (Still got to be a bit careful with drugs though.)
Right. With my cyborg, it was a bit of a shock since she'd never been conscious since the accident and just wakes up a cyborg who is trapped on a pirate ship. And then she was also informed she had a chip in her head. (He put that there so the cybernetics would interface better, leading to a quick learning curve.)
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chill13 In reply to Rebel-Rider [2014-07-24 17:20:51 +0000 UTC]
Wow. That's just about what happened to Rover.
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Rebel-Rider In reply to chill13 [2014-07-24 17:28:02 +0000 UTC]
In her case, it was a fire grenade, not a wreck. The pirate captain was very upset about the incident, which is why he used so much of his own coin to patch her up even though she was a bounty hunter, which is that part of the galaxy's closest thing to law enforcement.
It's rather ironic that we have very similar characters and crews, especially when I think that both of our cyborgs are red heads with green eyes.
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