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Photoshop, Wacom Intuos 3
standard brush set + custom brush made up on the spot
my own conscript and conlang

It's a fairy tale type story I made up a while ago: The Tale of Nibel. It would be an adaption, most likely, because Nibel wouldn't have spoken this language...

I really want to do something like this with traditional mediums.

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I actually copied the text in the image straight from a hand-written copy. However, I’ve long ago lost the English version, and the Guha grammar has evolved so much since I initially wrote this, that I’m not even going to bother providing a transcription. So without further delay, the first half of the Tale of Nibel:

First Part:

There was once a Sivo farmer named Tomato. He had a beautiful daughter and she was named Nibel. Her father was trying to find a man for her to marry, but she would have none. The man she loved was a fisherman. This man was Tam Ke, the Kasoro.

Every day, when they met, Tam Ke would bring flowers for Nibel. And every week she would make him a kekin*. In this way they spent their days together. When evening fell, Nibel would return to her father’s farm, and Tam Ke would return to his home by the sea.

When the Kasoro left for war against the Sinalu**, Tam Ke was made to go as well. Nibel cried and cried. Tomato, Nibel’s father, married her to a Sivo merchant. She was apathetic toward him. Her heart thought only of Tam Ke. She cried for him for many years. She never heard a single word about Tam Ke.

Now, Tam Ke was very courageous, but during a particularly vicious battle he was injured and died. His body was committed, as is the custom of the Kasoro, to the sea. There he was found by a god of the sea, and his life was returned to him. When he awoke, the first thing Tam Ke asked was, “Where is my Nibel?”

The god liked this question, and so he inquired, “Who is Nibel?”

*Same idea as Stromboli…but different.
**Another group of people
Sivo and Kasoro are ethnic groups.

Second Part: [link]
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Comments: 21

conciliarityoftepat [2015-08-25 16:16:21 +0000 UTC]

Some people make languages and some even write stories in them, but it's indeed impressive for a conlanger to go all the way to making an illustrated manuscript page - and such a nice one. It gives the world of the language much more of a sense of reality.

Though what does the red lettering signify?

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far-from-earth In reply to conciliarityoftepat [2016-01-27 23:17:16 +0000 UTC]

Names and titles were written in red for these pages. (Sorry for the delay, but thank you for your interest!)

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chashio [2013-03-13 18:23:47 +0000 UTC]

Very nice.

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juhhmi [2013-01-16 19:20:54 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful works of art and writing!

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far-from-earth In reply to juhhmi [2013-01-18 03:47:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks you so much on both accounts. I don't usually get compliments on my writing, so that, in particular, means a lot to me.

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juhhmi In reply to far-from-earth [2013-01-18 11:42:10 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome!

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Rostov-na-don [2011-09-22 10:21:22 +0000 UTC]

Can you upload your brush set if possible?

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far-from-earth In reply to Rostov-na-don [2011-09-25 12:56:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm 99.98% positive that I used a default brush setting, although I may have tweaked the opacity or flow. Unfortunately, I no longer have photoshop.

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Rostov-na-don In reply to far-from-earth [2011-09-25 15:17:57 +0000 UTC]

Aaw... Still extra awesome work

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ImaginaryMdA [2010-10-23 10:41:17 +0000 UTC]

you are simply filled with awesomeness!
but one day, maybe next century, I will read this!

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far-from-earth In reply to ImaginaryMdA [2010-10-23 13:18:16 +0000 UTC]

Hahaha-oh, thank you.

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Mjondras [2009-06-26 13:35:58 +0000 UTC]

How did you go about creating the glyphs? Are they one word each?

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far-from-earth In reply to Mjondras [2009-06-26 14:00:22 +0000 UTC]

Do you mean in terms of font? Or in terms of reading the letters?

In terms of font: I wrote this entire page by hand.

If you mean reading the letters themselves, each 'glyph' is composed of 1 or 2 syllables (or pseudo syllables(in this sample; in up-to-date samples there can be as many as 3 syllables)). It is possible that an entire word is conveyed in one figure.

So the text in the top right red square reads [rehe] [fo] [nonspoken] [nibe] [l]. The middle figure just visually denotes that the next word is a name.

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Mjondras In reply to far-from-earth [2009-06-26 14:07:04 +0000 UTC]

Fascinating. Are you done creating all of the glyphs, or do you need to create new ones from time to time?

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far-from-earth In reply to Mjondras [2009-06-26 14:11:52 +0000 UTC]

well, it's mostly an alphabet, so for the most part, it's finished. I do add the occassional special characters now and then, and some of the letters have gone through quite a few changes. But on the whole I'd say the script is pretty stable.

It works a bit like Hangul, so if you wanted, you could go here [link] and down in the artist's comments I've written the transliteration. You could probably work out what letter is what.

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BethCarr [2009-03-29 04:57:34 +0000 UTC]

That's absolutely beautiful, and I love the story.

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far-from-earth In reply to BethCarr [2009-03-29 20:52:26 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad someone else gets a kick out of these.

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Alt-Reality [2009-03-03 03:23:10 +0000 UTC]

Hey, that is really cool!

I'd like to do something like that with my conlang sometime.

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far-from-earth In reply to Alt-Reality [2009-03-04 02:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Go for it! It's really fun to do (or I think so, at least).

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Etherelmidori [2008-12-27 16:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Whoa! That's so cool. I wish I could read it

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far-from-earth In reply to Etherelmidori [2008-12-27 17:39:47 +0000 UTC]

Ah thank you! Maybe I'll type it up someday. Really, it's better like this because it's a dull story. This way people can wonder about it and that makes faaar more interesting. xP

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