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JuliusScipio In reply to 0hgravity [2012-06-18 03:00:18 +0000 UTC]
(Eeyup! It's part of why I love Horace, because he wrote the original "Chill and enjoy life" poem. He's the Carpe Diem guy. It's a wonderful poem, and he's an awesome poet, and in a lot of ways that's kind of his whole message, that people take things they shouldn't seriously and get caught up in dumb stuff. Highly recommend, with a good translation he's magnificent.)
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0hgravity In reply to JuliusScipio [2012-06-18 03:10:44 +0000 UTC]
I'll check him out when I get a chance.
Always a good message.
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TexasDreamer01 [2012-05-14 19:11:15 +0000 UTC]
I love how you managed to incorporate so many different arts in there. It reads quite vibrantly, and I can almost hear the expressions on your face and the gestures of your arms. You explained the travails of an artist quite superbly.
(Also, you have an extra "h" on holding.)
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gummyrabbit [2012-04-19 01:31:48 +0000 UTC]
This gorgeous, especially the thought in the last line.
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Golden-Koi [2012-03-29 03:21:56 +0000 UTC]
This feels like real poetry, the type that I remember reading in English books when I was a senior in high school. So lofty that it's difficult to feel you fully understand what the writer meant in every line, but also close enough to home that any artist could feel the love directed to them, and both of those to me hold the charm. But in a way, the last bit of your blurb beneath the poem hits home most of all for me. I write everything, my novels, my poetry, it's all about war and often I try to have my characters find some small beauty in a world that has been destroyed by conflict. "Calculus of the howitzer", for some reason to me, is even more beautiful than the rest. Bravo, friend.
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Golden-Koi In reply to JuliusScipio [2012-03-29 05:23:19 +0000 UTC]
Haha, yes, there's nothing quite like receiving some bit of love on a piece of writing. It's nice to get views and faves on my digital art too, but it just doesn't compare. I think the phrase really touched me because for the last week I've been gunning to finish the second novel I've been writing and my characters have just undergone the realization of needing to attend to, basically, the "ruthless calculus of war", as Mass Effect 3 puts it. I quite enjoyed the poem itself too, don't get me wrong, but you know I'm sure how writers can latch onto a phrase like a dog with a particularly good shoe. And way to hit the nail on the head--I played the game Fallout not long before I wrote my first novel, and I was so entranced by the idea of it's war, and by that extension, Hiroshima and Nagasaki, that a few chunks of that obsession made it into my first book. And then I drove all my professors nuts because I wrote all of my nursing papers on radiation sickness. I digress.
Not to try and trade comments for comments--not at all--but I wonder if you might enjoy the most recent poem I wrote. [link] Keep on writing, you have a great poetic style that rubs me the right way.
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niraj-gupta [2012-02-27 23:41:46 +0000 UTC]
well spoken. often i get criticised because people dont think visual arts are practical and of any significance. but we artists are mostly real and not arrogant like we are portrayed by narrow minded people with no sense of sentimentality.. very soft flowing words you speak. and the truth too. thanks. keep up the good words
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AiweAlako [2012-02-24 04:58:04 +0000 UTC]
oh. this is beautiful.
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