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Description {Excalibur Sonic / Lady Gladys}

"The English Ladye And The Knight"[link]

It was an English ladye bright,
(The sun shines fair on Carlisle wall,)
And she would marry a Scottish knight,
For Love will still be lord of all.

Blithely they saw the rising sun
When he shone fair on Carlisle wall;
But they were sad ere day was done,
Though Love was still the lord of all.

Her sire gave brooch and jewel fine,
Where the sun shines fair on Carlisle wall;
Her brother gave but a flask of wine,
For ire that Love was lord of all.

For she had lands both meadow and lea,
Where the sun shines fair on Carlisle wall,
For he swore her death, ere he would see
A Scottish knight the lord of all.

That wine she had not tasted well
(The sun shines fair on Carlisle wall)
When dead, in her true love's arms, she fell,
For Love was still the lord of all!

He pierced her brother to the heart,
Where the sun shines fair on Carlisle wall -
So perish all would true love part
That Love may still be lord of all!

And then he took the cross divine,
Where the sun shines fair on Carlisle wall,
And died for her sake in Palestine;
So Love was still the lord of all.

Now all ye lovers, that faithful prove,
(The sun shines fair on Carlisle wall)
Pray for their souls who died for love,
For Love shall still be lord of all!



Trust me, I have A LOT more to post by next week, I just really wanted to go ahead and post this since I already had it done y'know.

Alright, so...
EXCALIBUR SONIC.
WAS A LOT OF HARD WORK TO DRAW GAWD DANG. XD
But, he was LOADS of fun to draw, you guys should try it sometime XD

Story?
Meh, this time its a creativity for thought drawing.

I was aiming for a scene with both of them kind of in a respectful silence after a few losses of blah and blah.

Or maybe even a scene with them just silent at each other, maybe angry, or saddened with each others behavior?

Meh, IDK.
These two do not like each other, **kinda** at all XD, Lady Gladys is a soloist and of course Sonic wants everyone to work together towards the common goal, but Gladys being the b**** she is wont cooperate with anyone for nothing

LoL Knight Rivalry Lurve <3

Okay the drawing in general.
My thoughts, I think I shaded well, for my first time ever drawing Excalibur Sonic it came out alright, I think the scene kind of fits with the tone of the song I chose.
Gladys is alright, I honestly like Excalibur Sonic MUCH more in the drawing.
I could have done the tree better, and the background though.

Any extra critique would be amazing.

I hate and love my taste of music BTW ;w;


Excalibur Sonic belongs to SEGA
Lady Gladys/ Vegas Silversnow Counterpart belongs to Me.
Art Style belongs to SEGA
Art Belongs to Me.
Song belongs to Loreena McKennitt



Questions in the Comments,
Favorites, Watches, and Critiques would be just great ^^
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Comments: 50

RadarFox [2012-03-10 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]

I'll give a critique. C:
The shading is very nice and blended well. It looks like you actually put some time and thought into it instead of adding shading to random areas. Same thing with the lighting. I really like all the detail you put into the clothing, especially Sonic's helmet. I love that cape. x3
The colors you used for the flowers are the perfect tone for this particular piece. Not to vivid, or not to dull.
The branch of the tree Sonic is sitting in looks unnatural to me. The blossoms are very nice, but are clumped together too close, and look as if they were just put up on the tree without anything supporting them or holding them up. I suggest that next time you add some more branches to the upper area where the flowers start to appear. Here's some great tutorials to help you out-
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The style you used for this is a bit overused, and not very original. I suggest you move on to a more individual and thought out style. However, the idea behind the drawing is very creative.
The line art is sort of messy in some areas. For a good result in line art, you should be very concentrated on what you are doing, and keep a steady hand so it doesn't get all wobbly. And don't make some areas (of the line art) thicker than others unless it's part of the shading or if you're making the outline stand out. That makes it look like you were trying to cover up mistakes, which I am pretty guilty of doing myself sometimes.
The expressions are okay, but it doesn't really look like they don't like each other. It would look better, in my opinion, if you made Sonic glaring at Lady Gladys out of the corner of his eye.
The anatomy is okay, it fits the style, and their poses actually look anatomically possible and make sense. However, Lady Gladys looks kind of stiff. Sonic's farther leg looks kind of awkward. I think the pose would look more natural if it was resting on the branch instead of having it lifted up.
I do like the perspective on this one for the most part. I can see you put some work into making it loo like they were actually sitting on the tree branches, and you pulled it off pretty well. However, Lady Gladys sort of looks like she's floating. I believe it's because she doesn't look like she's ON the branch, but just floating in front of it. If you happen to create a similar piece, seat the character a little farther back than you did for Lady Gladys on this one. The perspective on sonic is very nice though. C:
Did I mention I like the vines hanging down in the background?
Cause' I do. :u
Well, I don't really have anything else to say about the picture soooo....
TIME TO SUM IT UP. :-D
Originality- 3/5
Effort- 4/5
Shading and lighting- 4.5/5
Background- 2.3/5
Perspective- 3/5
Vision- 2/5
Technique- 2.9/5
Impact- 3/5
total score- 24.7/40
Overall, I think this is a nice drawing, but like all artists, there's some stuff you need to work on. There's no such thing as a perfect piece of art, and even the best artists pictures have plenty of flaws.
I hope you find this mildly helpful.
-Radar

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Status-Endless [2011-12-22 03:58:05 +0000 UTC]

Oh mah gosh, this is just amazing! The detail is fantastic! <3

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TheSonicReploid [2011-12-19 22:17:32 +0000 UTC]

Aww, how cute. Are you a Sonic Fangirl too?

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MoonlightVegas In reply to TheSonicReploid [2011-12-20 19:39:37 +0000 UTC]

Awww well you COULD say I am XD He IS just so CUTE but Im not a rabid fangirl that goodness XD

**I used to be ;w;

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TheSonicReploid In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-29 21:56:11 +0000 UTC]

Sonic sure is adorable, isn't he? It's gotta be that cocky and cute grin he always sports. I love that little smile of his. Sonic has the best smile out of any character

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galaxy-thehedgehog [2011-12-18 12:07:43 +0000 UTC]

nice art ^^

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MoonlightVegas In reply to galaxy-thehedgehog [2011-12-20 19:39:48 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much!

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galaxy-thehedgehog In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-21 19:43:36 +0000 UTC]

np

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susaki-sama [2011-12-17 16:57:10 +0000 UTC]

I can't believe you really love the armor
THAT MEANS ALOT TO ME!!!!!!!!!XD

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MoonlightVegas In reply to susaki-sama [2011-12-20 19:41:54 +0000 UTC]

SUSAKI!!
I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER!!! X3

And YES I LOVED the armor, although I switched it around a bit her for the Black Knight setting, other than that the ORIGINAL armor I am STILL using, I just need to draw it XD

I was waiting until I got a tablet so I could do the beautiful glow effect
;W;

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RainyCloudd [2011-12-17 03:17:34 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful <3

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MoonlightVegas In reply to RainyCloudd [2011-12-17 15:00:40 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Sal!! X3

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RainyCloudd In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-20 02:35:02 +0000 UTC]

No prob c:

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Goldenfoxlily [2011-12-15 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]

Excalibur Sonic looks awsome!!!!!!!!

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MoonlightVegas In reply to Goldenfoxlily [2011-12-17 15:00:47 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! X3

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KitsuneHime91 [2011-12-13 18:31:59 +0000 UTC]

Nice! The coloring is awesome as always. :3

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MoonlightVegas In reply to KitsuneHime91 [2011-12-17 15:01:37 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks!~
My coloring is getting better I have to say, I still have to work on anatomy, but Im glad my coloring is improving ^^

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KitsuneHime91 In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-18 19:02:09 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. X3 You are definitely improving though, the Anatomy looks fine to me. XD

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XButterflyEffectX [2011-12-13 10:16:08 +0000 UTC]

I love it

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MoonlightVegas In reply to XButterflyEffectX [2011-12-17 15:01:45 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! X3

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GeekGem [2011-12-13 03:43:30 +0000 UTC]

this is crudding awesome nice job friend
wow you even made vegas sexy

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MoonlightVegas In reply to GeekGem [2011-12-17 15:03:19 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks SL!
You ALWAYS think shes sexy XDDD Aw come on there is NO way I make her look that cute XD

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GeekGem In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-17 20:51:15 +0000 UTC]

no prob friend
well hey im some just guy who litterly somtimes some sonic girls or other girl charcaters are sexy and good looking

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Sonar15 [2011-12-13 02:24:41 +0000 UTC]

WOW!!!! Now I only wish to draw like that! This is amazing work! I wonder what Sonar will look like with an armor suit like sonic only a bit more different... :/ But lovely work as always! I really enjoy your drawing! ^^

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MoonlightVegas In reply to Sonar15 [2011-12-17 15:06:06 +0000 UTC]

FFF Sonar you draw MUCH better than me honestly! XD
You should draw it! I would LOVE to see it!...But...ITSSOHARDTODRAWARMOR No really its REALLY hard XD
And thanks!!
My half of the art trade is in the lineart and coloring stage right now ;D I just have a few more details to finish! ^^

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Sonar15 In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-18 07:53:01 +0000 UTC]

No really! We BOTH draw good! And lets leave it that way! Oh your welcome!

Oh cool! Take your time on it ok?! <3 ^^

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StarryCozmo [2011-12-13 02:23:54 +0000 UTC]

LOL I LOVE WOLVES

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MoonlightVegas In reply to StarryCozmo [2011-12-17 15:02:37 +0000 UTC]

So do I ^^

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StarryCozmo In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-17 23:54:49 +0000 UTC]

But for some reason, no offense, but I think wolves don't have eyes like Vegas's. Then that means... she is an EXTREMELY rare wolf. Hope you enjoy this imformation.

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sonicworldadventure7 [2011-12-13 02:04:51 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful drawing I've ever seen!

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MoonlightVegas In reply to sonicworldadventure7 [2011-12-17 15:02:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! X3

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blameless99 [2011-12-13 02:02:04 +0000 UTC]

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StarryCozmo [2011-12-13 02:01:27 +0000 UTC]

Oh snowballs you got sonics eye thingy wrong

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MoonlightVegas In reply to StarryCozmo [2011-12-17 15:02:24 +0000 UTC]

I got what wrong? ;W;

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StarryCozmo In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-17 23:56:52 +0000 UTC]

It is because you didn't do the design like Vegas's eyes on him or are they reversed?

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Kentami [2011-12-13 01:35:39 +0000 UTC]

cool story and nice art^^

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MoonlightVegas In reply to Kentami [2011-12-13 01:38:16 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!
Even though it was barely a story thanks XD

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carrot-cat17 [2011-12-13 00:59:27 +0000 UTC]

yesh! >: D

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MoonlightVegas In reply to carrot-cat17 [2011-12-13 01:38:25 +0000 UTC]

LOL YES!

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carrot-cat17 In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-13 01:40:08 +0000 UTC]

>: D

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XxPimpNinja07xX [2011-12-13 00:50:24 +0000 UTC]

OMG SO PRETTY

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MoonlightVegas In reply to XxPimpNinja07xX [2011-12-13 01:38:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! X3

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XxPimpNinja07xX In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-13 01:39:09 +0000 UTC]

np

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NayrutheTiger [2011-12-13 00:49:40 +0000 UTC]

Looks great!

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MoonlightVegas In reply to NayrutheTiger [2011-12-13 01:38:38 +0000 UTC]

LOL Thanks! X3

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Santac00l [2011-12-13 00:46:31 +0000 UTC]

EPIC

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MoonlightVegas In reply to Santac00l [2011-12-13 01:38:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! XD

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AuxiliatrixDisciples [2011-12-13 00:44:02 +0000 UTC]

WIN!

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MoonlightVegas In reply to AuxiliatrixDisciples [2011-12-13 01:38:51 +0000 UTC]

Thanks!! XD

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AuxiliatrixDisciples In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-13 01:39:42 +0000 UTC]

NP!

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