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RadarFox [2012-03-10 02:16:05 +0000 UTC]
I'll give a critique. C:
The shading is very nice and blended well. It looks like you actually put some time and thought into it instead of adding shading to random areas. Same thing with the lighting. I really like all the detail you put into the clothing, especially Sonic's helmet. I love that cape. x3
The colors you used for the flowers are the perfect tone for this particular piece. Not to vivid, or not to dull.
The branch of the tree Sonic is sitting in looks unnatural to me. The blossoms are very nice, but are clumped together too close, and look as if they were just put up on the tree without anything supporting them or holding them up. I suggest that next time you add some more branches to the upper area where the flowers start to appear. Here's some great tutorials to help you out-
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The style you used for this is a bit overused, and not very original. I suggest you move on to a more individual and thought out style. However, the idea behind the drawing is very creative.
The line art is sort of messy in some areas. For a good result in line art, you should be very concentrated on what you are doing, and keep a steady hand so it doesn't get all wobbly. And don't make some areas (of the line art) thicker than others unless it's part of the shading or if you're making the outline stand out. That makes it look like you were trying to cover up mistakes, which I am pretty guilty of doing myself sometimes.
The expressions are okay, but it doesn't really look like they don't like each other. It would look better, in my opinion, if you made Sonic glaring at Lady Gladys out of the corner of his eye.
The anatomy is okay, it fits the style, and their poses actually look anatomically possible and make sense. However, Lady Gladys looks kind of stiff. Sonic's farther leg looks kind of awkward. I think the pose would look more natural if it was resting on the branch instead of having it lifted up.
I do like the perspective on this one for the most part. I can see you put some work into making it loo like they were actually sitting on the tree branches, and you pulled it off pretty well. However, Lady Gladys sort of looks like she's floating. I believe it's because she doesn't look like she's ON the branch, but just floating in front of it. If you happen to create a similar piece, seat the character a little farther back than you did for Lady Gladys on this one. The perspective on sonic is very nice though. C:
Did I mention I like the vines hanging down in the background?
Cause' I do. :u
Well, I don't really have anything else to say about the picture soooo....
TIME TO SUM IT UP. :-D
Originality- 3/5
Effort- 4/5
Shading and lighting- 4.5/5
Background- 2.3/5
Perspective- 3/5
Vision- 2/5
Technique- 2.9/5
Impact- 3/5
total score- 24.7/40
Overall, I think this is a nice drawing, but like all artists, there's some stuff you need to work on. There's no such thing as a perfect piece of art, and even the best artists pictures have plenty of flaws.
I hope you find this mildly helpful.
-Radar
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Status-Endless [2011-12-22 03:58:05 +0000 UTC]
Oh mah gosh, this is just amazing! The detail is fantastic! <3
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MoonlightVegas In reply to TheSonicReploid [2011-12-20 19:39:37 +0000 UTC]
Awww well you COULD say I am XD He IS just so CUTE but Im not a rabid fangirl that goodness XD
**I used to be ;w;
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MoonlightVegas In reply to susaki-sama [2011-12-20 19:41:54 +0000 UTC]
SUSAKI!!
I HAVEN'T TALKED TO YOU IN FOREVER!!! X3
And YES I LOVED the armor, although I switched it around a bit her for the Black Knight setting, other than that the ORIGINAL armor I am STILL using, I just need to draw it XD
I was waiting until I got a tablet so I could do the beautiful glow effect
;W;
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RainyCloudd [2011-12-17 03:17:34 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful <3
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Goldenfoxlily [2011-12-15 04:27:52 +0000 UTC]
Excalibur Sonic looks awsome!!!!!!!!
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MoonlightVegas In reply to KitsuneHime91 [2011-12-17 15:01:37 +0000 UTC]
LOL Thanks!~
My coloring is getting better I have to say, I still have to work on anatomy, but Im glad my coloring is improving ^^
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KitsuneHime91 In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-18 19:02:09 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. X3 You are definitely improving though, the Anatomy looks fine to me. XD
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GeekGem [2011-12-13 03:43:30 +0000 UTC]
this is crudding awesome nice job friend
wow you even made vegas sexy
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MoonlightVegas In reply to GeekGem [2011-12-17 15:03:19 +0000 UTC]
LOL Thanks SL!
You ALWAYS think shes sexy XDDD Aw come on there is NO way I make her look that cute XD
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GeekGem In reply to MoonlightVegas [2011-12-17 20:51:15 +0000 UTC]
no prob friend
well hey im some just guy who litterly somtimes some sonic girls or other girl charcaters are sexy and good looking
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MoonlightVegas In reply to Sonar15 [2011-12-17 15:06:06 +0000 UTC]
FFF Sonar you draw MUCH better than me honestly! XD
You should draw it! I would LOVE to see it!...But...ITSSOHARDTODRAWARMOR No really its REALLY hard XD
And thanks!!
My half of the art trade is in the lineart and coloring stage right now ;D I just have a few more details to finish! ^^
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StarryCozmo [2011-12-13 02:23:54 +0000 UTC]
LOL I LOVE WOLVES
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Kentami [2011-12-13 01:35:39 +0000 UTC]
cool story and nice art^^
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MoonlightVegas In reply to Kentami [2011-12-13 01:38:16 +0000 UTC]
Thank you!
Even though it was barely a story thanks XD
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carrot-cat17 [2011-12-13 00:59:27 +0000 UTC]
yesh! >: D
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NayrutheTiger [2011-12-13 00:49:40 +0000 UTC]
Looks great!
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Santac00l [2011-12-13 00:46:31 +0000 UTC]
EPIC
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