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Published: 2008-11-06 23:08:12 +0000 UTC; Views: 18086; Favourites: 363; Downloads: 77
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Description Her name is Stitches and I love her.
She doesn't believe that - she says it is an improbability.
She doesn't say impossibility and that gives me hope.

No one but me knows why she's called Stitches.

I've run my hands over her soft white skin,
Flushed with the fevers of midnight.
I've touched it.

I've let my fingertips explore the hitches in her skin,
Where her body couldn't quite heal itself.

Old memories of gaping holes and vicious lies.

From her shoulder to her wrist,
From her knee to her ankle,
Any where she can negotiate a knife - she is Stitches.

It makes her cry sometimes.
She says she doesn't like being a rag doll any more.

They're old scars, robbing her flesh of its innocence,
Betraying her old soul - etching it out - a tally on her skin.

IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII   IIIII  
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She draws a thick red line under everything
and tries to start again.

She doesn't like to be touched some nights,
I see her paper skin crawling at my soft kisses
and roll over to feign sleep.

It's not her fault, the pain of the scars won't fade,
The scars that the stitches can't mend.


Her name is Stitches and I love her.
The girl with the Frankensteined heart.
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Comments: 178

LopsidedFrosty345 [2020-02-05 04:00:04 +0000 UTC]

Nice.


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Teague-Drydan [2018-05-17 21:32:27 +0000 UTC]

The ending.....


Thank you for sharing.

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TheLunaLily [2018-05-01 18:16:47 +0000 UTC]

This is so powerful. I have no words left. 

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blackfeather [2016-07-29 21:52:08 +0000 UTC]

very sweet.

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kloe-oki [2014-05-28 05:15:38 +0000 UTC]

wow...talk about powerful i'm at a lost for words.

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PoetryOD In reply to kloe-oki [2014-06-16 01:38:33 +0000 UTC]

an old favourite

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kloe-oki In reply to PoetryOD [2014-06-16 06:13:47 +0000 UTC]

oh

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MissHarlen [2013-10-18 17:01:18 +0000 UTC]

My cousin Elrond is a voracious self-harmer. It's thrown a wrench in many of the opportunities he has had presented to him. Reading this effected me in a way I can't quite explain. It made me think of his wife, Jess. She has never judged him for his scars, even though sometimes he practically begs her to. He doesn't understand how someone could love him for who he is, not what he's done to himself. Everyone else in his life has been really rough on him about his scars. They kept trying to "change" him and to "make him better". No one but myself and his Jess has ever just accepted that this is how he is, and how he deals with stress. We may want him to stop hurting himself, but we're never going to force our opinions on him. We love him for the way he is.


Long story short: I really enjoy this piece.

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PoetryOD In reply to MissHarlen [2013-10-21 03:12:11 +0000 UTC]

I am so glad... I was 'Stitches', I still am. She is me, I am her. This poem I suppose was my subconscious trying to pin down the possibility that even broken I am lovable... and I think thats why people relate to it.

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LadyNeytiri [2013-07-16 16:21:32 +0000 UTC]

Awww, this is so sweet~
I love the insight you get but are reminded
that only the speaker knows why she is called Stitches.
So beautiful...

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PoetryOD In reply to LadyNeytiri [2013-07-18 20:43:44 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much, I love this poem

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LadyNeytiri In reply to PoetryOD [2013-07-19 16:03:15 +0000 UTC]

No problem, hon
It's a mesmerizing poem, so beautiful ^_^

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PoetryOD In reply to LadyNeytiri [2013-07-20 02:49:46 +0000 UTC]

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LadyNeytiri In reply to PoetryOD [2013-07-20 03:27:36 +0000 UTC]

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LadyXarity [2013-07-06 22:11:43 +0000 UTC]

This is really touching, reminded me of a girl i used to know.

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PoetryOD In reply to LadyXarity [2013-07-08 19:34:43 +0000 UTC]

Nods, I hear that a lot

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slowlyfallingpart [2013-06-20 04:57:16 +0000 UTC]

Oh my God, this is beautiful, this is so beautiful, it made me cry.

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PoetryOD In reply to slowlyfallingpart [2013-06-20 15:15:07 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you enjoyed it. It's my favourite.

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XomegaXX [2013-06-03 12:21:54 +0000 UTC]

Oh.
Oh my.
You tugged at my heart strings.
I knOw so many of these. ..
I created one.

You capture it perfectly.

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PoetryOD In reply to XomegaXX [2013-06-03 16:15:39 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much. I am this girl

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XomegaXX In reply to PoetryOD [2013-06-08 18:52:35 +0000 UTC]

It's a spectacular peom.

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Astrikos [2013-04-25 21:28:45 +0000 UTC]

This is such a powerful poem.
Very beautiful and touching.

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Cortni-Whitney [2013-03-28 06:07:22 +0000 UTC]

Love this piece. It spoke volumes deep inside.

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PoetryOD In reply to Cortni-Whitney [2013-04-18 13:55:18 +0000 UTC]

I'm late responding because April hates me, I apologise :[

Thank you, this is one of my favourites and is definately my most popular. I love it.

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Mysteryouz-Black-Cat [2013-03-08 03:30:14 +0000 UTC]

This is amazing im totally watching u ^.<

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PoetryOD In reply to Mysteryouz-Black-Cat [2013-03-10 12:27:42 +0000 UTC]

Aw yay thank you! This is one of my favourites.

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donutmonk [2013-02-10 01:48:38 +0000 UTC]

Why is this so good? QAQ

*bows*

Be my sempai. > 3<

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BurningAngels101 [2013-02-03 04:09:25 +0000 UTC]

This is probably one of the best poems I've ever read.....
It's very sad, but is also very true, very sweet, very beautiful. It was refreshing..... thanks for sharing this.

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PoetryOD In reply to BurningAngels101 [2013-02-08 20:47:00 +0000 UTC]

Gosh thank you. I am really proud of the Stitches poems. They are very truthful but from a hopeful place.

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BurningAngels101 In reply to PoetryOD [2013-02-10 04:01:32 +0000 UTC]

np

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BeyondJen [2013-01-14 01:03:10 +0000 UTC]

This is tragically beautiful.

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PoetryOD In reply to BeyondJen [2013-01-14 18:08:51 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, this one is my favourite and has been a lot of other peoples' favourite too. It has reached a lot of people so I love it.

- Stitches (obviously)

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BeyondJen In reply to PoetryOD [2013-01-14 18:35:36 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. It's easy to see why this is so well liked.
I have a friend that bares the name as well, so it struck a chord. I think you did a fantastic job of reaching a global audience.

:hugs:

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PoetryOD In reply to BeyondJen [2013-01-16 19:19:06 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, although obviously when I wrote it I was writing about my own feelings. I just try to be honest and then hope that people can relate to it.

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Lacewinged-Beauty [2013-01-06 07:06:00 +0000 UTC]


This is so very beautiful and vulnerable.

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PoetryOD In reply to Lacewinged-Beauty [2013-01-09 20:32:46 +0000 UTC]

Thank you Lacewinged, I'm really glad you liked this one as it is my absolute favourite from my collection

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Lacewinged-Beauty In reply to PoetryOD [2013-01-12 04:40:26 +0000 UTC]


You are most welcome and please, call me Kirsty!

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hakkaobake [2012-12-24 20:02:16 +0000 UTC]

Brilliant. I enjoyed this, a lot.

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PoetryOD In reply to hakkaobake [2012-12-28 05:13:47 +0000 UTC]

yay! I'm really glad!

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hakkaobake In reply to PoetryOD [2012-12-28 08:24:13 +0000 UTC]

Yay my comment didn't go unread!

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PoetryOD In reply to hakkaobake [2012-12-30 07:11:26 +0000 UTC]

giggles!

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KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-22 00:54:40 +0000 UTC]

this is wonderful, and makes it hard to speak..

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PoetryOD In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-22 00:55:28 +0000 UTC]

Thank you, Stitches is my most popular work, and my personal favourite. I know so many Stitches in this world.

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to PoetryOD [2012-12-22 00:57:10 +0000 UTC]

its sadly my nick name... for a couple of reasons one because stitch saved my life and now i collect them, the other is much longer much more complicated

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PoetryOD In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-22 01:09:41 +0000 UTC]

actually that person didnt post the full artists comment. `Pelicanh originally had this in the artists description of that photo


"The first night I met Scar (GOD, I wish I could use her real name, it’s so much prettier) I asked her about her scars. I ran my hand along her arm and felt the scars. Scars that came from cutting herself.
She said with a smile, “I like them. They remind me where I came from. I’m better now.”
I fell MADLY in love with her that night and as I have come to know her better, it only gets deeper. A TRULY remarkable spirit in the world."

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to PoetryOD [2012-12-22 04:01:37 +0000 UTC]

cool and there is nothing wrong with scar, he was my fav disney villan but she sounds like a wonderful person

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PoetryOD In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-22 01:07:59 +0000 UTC]

Don't be sad. Stitches is 99% me, .5% every one i ever met, and .5% a woman called Scar, who an amazing photographer called `Pelicanh posted a beautiful photograph of, here on DA. that photo has now been removed but you can find it [link] < there. Be WARNED it includes nakedness!

The quote under the pic was the artists description when it was posted, and it gave a lot of people, including me, hope that despite all the damage someone could still find us beautiful.

Theres no shame being a Stitches, or a Scar... especially when you know there are others out there.

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to PoetryOD [2012-12-22 04:07:27 +0000 UTC]

mine arent as...defined i would say. i heal very very quickly. some times when im really bad off, i go find random ppl usually drunk ppl, and pick a fight with them. it seems the only scars i have outwardly are along my knuckles where a knife cut me ( a tattoo covers it now) and the large scar along my skull.but it seems know matter how bad or how vicious the person is i seem to always get up and always walk away. i dont always want to. and im not sure why im telling you this...

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PoetryOD In reply to KuraiTenshiV [2012-12-23 02:19:13 +0000 UTC]

It's good to tell *someone*.

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KuraiTenshiV In reply to PoetryOD [2012-12-23 04:31:06 +0000 UTC]

I guess so

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