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whitesparrow123 [2016-07-31 16:35:11 +0000 UTC]
I'm glad I side-tracked from the nuz I was reading, and clicked on a link to this one to see what it was about. The concept of a certain level of free will in pokemon instead of just doing whatever the trainer says because they're the trainer is very realistic. I liked the concept of pokemon even working and earning a pay that was esstablished earlier on in the prologue, it sets up a stage for a more leveled ground, seeing pokemon more like equals instead of creatures that have to be taught basic rules. But the development that I like the most, is that Silver isn't portrayed as a criminal. He's arrogant, and impatient, but not 'evil' in the sence of the word. Nice nuz, good job!
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MeiMiesa [2016-07-23 02:07:42 +0000 UTC]
Man you are art just keeps getting better and better. wow < u > all the action and dynamic
I am nervous to see the outcome of this battle @_@
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Rasarak In reply to MeiMiesa [2016-08-01 05:36:11 +0000 UTC]
<3
You're a sweetums, Ms Mei. Thank you very much! ^^
I hope to astonish. :3
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MeiMiesa In reply to Rasarak [2016-08-02 17:19:04 +0000 UTC]
ffff I am not <3 you are super sweet~ and you're welcome :D
*o* looking forward to it! Just hope no one gets hurt
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larry1123 [2016-07-18 10:47:38 +0000 UTC]
The pokemon look better every time.
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Rasarak In reply to larry1123 [2016-07-18 16:02:04 +0000 UTC]
Thanks man! <3
I try my damndest...
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songwithnosoul [2016-07-15 01:46:37 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on being on-model! I think the smokescreen effect looks great. And I think this is an interesting way to start things off, with the PokΓ©mon having more strife with their Trainers than each other - the Totodile and Cyndaquil seem to be having a friendly match while everybody else gets worked up around them. Interesting.
Also, your artwork is really shiny and pretty and nice to look at. (A very technical analysis.)
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Rasarak In reply to songwithnosoul [2016-07-15 01:48:52 +0000 UTC]
You're so sweet! Thank you!Β
Also, I won't go into too much detail to bother you with my life, but your comment came at a very opportune time. I've been a little down lately.
<3
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songwithnosoul In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-15 02:15:08 +0000 UTC]
You're welcome. I'm very glad to help!
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TheRandomBoy [2016-07-12 22:56:59 +0000 UTC]
Right now, Ethan seems to be the slightly un confident protagonist, Lyra acts like the typical "I'm older than you" big sister and Silver is just plain rude. I can't wait to see how they will all develop as characters.
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XMaveria [2016-07-11 21:44:09 +0000 UTC]
Silver please....
I'm curious where this is goingΒ
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Raycchan [2016-07-11 13:04:03 +0000 UTC]
aw... I feel so bad for rosie watchign her friends fight is really killin' her ;w;
in the last two panels everyone simultaneously agreed that silver is an asshole :'D
the smoke effects are pretty cool! ovob
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Rasarak In reply to Raycchan [2016-07-11 22:38:22 +0000 UTC]
Thank ya much!!! ^^
Btw, Rose is the Cyndaquil. The Chikorita is Judith.
No worries on that. Their names'll be more prevalent in a few pages. xD
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Raycchan In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-12 04:22:40 +0000 UTC]
np : >Β
Ohh OOH sorry!
haha ok ;w;
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Velink [2016-07-11 09:31:17 +0000 UTC]
Holy crap this battle is dragging pretty long
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Rasarak In reply to Velink [2016-07-11 09:46:25 +0000 UTC]
Rest assured. There is a point!
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Velink In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-11 09:59:57 +0000 UTC]
awesome!
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Gecko-Comics [2016-07-11 06:23:52 +0000 UTC]
oh snap! things are getting heated!
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Wyvern-1 [2016-07-11 03:20:53 +0000 UTC]
"Dude, we're having a friendly battle here. Quit telling me to hurry it up, I'll beat him when I be-!!" *is tackled from behind again*
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Rasarak In reply to Wyvern-1 [2016-07-11 04:26:26 +0000 UTC]
xD
Sneak attack.
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cyclone8462 [2016-07-11 01:29:05 +0000 UTC]
I'm feeling Silver's pain.
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Rasarak In reply to cyclone8462 [2016-07-11 04:27:02 +0000 UTC]
Are you now? xD
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cyclone8462 In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-11 09:07:14 +0000 UTC]
He just wanted to get his Pokemon and go, but he was forced into battles. THEN his Pokemon decides to have a really chatty battle. What if he has an appointment?
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Rasarak In reply to cyclone8462 [2016-07-11 09:10:30 +0000 UTC]
Trufax. He is in a bit of a pickle right now.
But then again, could there be a bit more to it?
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cyclone8462 In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-11 09:15:56 +0000 UTC]
Yes, there must be.... he needs to hand in his TAXES!!!
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Walory [2016-07-11 01:05:10 +0000 UTC]
The drawing is so neat, AWESOME!
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Rasarak In reply to Walory [2016-07-11 04:26:39 +0000 UTC]
Thank ya much!! ^^
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Rasarak In reply to PK-Bubbles [2016-07-10 22:20:21 +0000 UTC]
Yup. Not at all. xD
Well, that and one other reason.
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Staurolith [2016-07-10 18:21:14 +0000 UTC]
yes yes yes this is beautiful.
"finish it" mmmmmmboi lookit that red flag
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Rasarak In reply to Staurolith [2016-07-10 22:20:02 +0000 UTC]
Good to hear from ya again, Ms. Oko! ^^
Nyas. All the red flags.
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SilverStrangequark [2016-07-10 18:08:06 +0000 UTC]
This is going somewhere dangerous for their relationship.
But I really like it. It's only the first serious battle, and it's already looking more enticing than a lot of gym battles I've seen.
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Rasarak In reply to SilverStrangequark [2016-07-10 22:19:21 +0000 UTC]
Thank ya much! ^^
I'm glad you're catching the nuance there. I was hoping I was clear enough.
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SilverStrangequark In reply to Rasarak [2016-07-11 16:43:28 +0000 UTC]
It is to me! I mean, this is all about what happens between the three of them, right? I see them as the real protagonists of the run.
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Gameb9oy [2016-07-10 17:20:12 +0000 UTC]
So apparently everyone hates Silver in the last two panels.
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