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Rasarak β My Oath To You: Chp. 1 Pg. 5: Severence (Part 2)
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Published: 2015-11-08 02:04:27 +0000 UTC; Views: 4805; Favourites: 61; Downloads: 23
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(Edit: Changed Lyra's eyes in Panel 8 because it was bothering the hell out of me.)
Two uploads in the time span of a month? Hell yeah! I hope I can keep this up!
I don't have much to say about this page. It's actually one of my favorites. I really liked the scripting part especially.
I did some changes to the art, particularly highlights and background shading. I wanted something simpler that didn't clash with the style. Something more aesthetic. I think it turned out better that way. Suitably cartoony.
Forgive me for my deception, by the way. But I think the more astute among you can figure out where I'm going with this.
Enjoy!
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The rival has entered I'm loving all the details and such for the licenses and gear that you have in this.
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Awww. Thank ya! ^^
I promise those details aren't arbitrary.
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OK, I really love the depiction of Elm, and how dynamic and loving this family is. Dang.
Also!! Silver is an actual registered trainer that ISN'T trying to steal a Pokemon? Wow.
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Thank ya!
Yeah. Seems Silver wants to be legit this time, since lurking menacingly near the window is a little creepy. xP
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Can't believe he's actually trying to make things official, like an adult. Kid's finally growing up from his hooligan ways, lmao
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Windows 10: Ripoff Edition.
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Hahah, angry ginger kid, just who we all expected
at least he is not a thief
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Yeah. I mean at least he had that going for him, amirite?
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hey, its assface
thats actually what i name my rival because it fits perfectly
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I'm a fan of dickmunch myself. xD
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lol, but its nine characters, I'm not sure if it works, unless they changed it in later generations
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Woo! I thought this nuzlocke was gone (I couldn't find it much on the forums) and I'm happy to find out it isn't.
The buildup is amazing, you spent a lot on the introduction and it tells me that you really care about originality and characterisation. While this comic is still in its early stages, I hope to see it through to the end, because I have a feeling it will wind up being great.
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It kinda sucks, actually. I update every time I finish a strip on the forums, and it usually ends up getting lost when it does. Cest la vie, I guess. Lotsa Nuzlockes.
I'm incredibly grateful for your support! (And I remember you. 
Don't worry. I don't plan on stopping until I finish. Even if it takes a decade.
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That's the spirit! It's very heartening to see dedication in nuzlocke people, with how many runs go to hell because the authors can't be arsed to continue them anymore. You have my cheer whenever you need it
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Wait... the third trainer is...
SILVER!?!? But... what?
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I really appreciated Elm's dialogue here. We so often see the professors as one-dimensional, so getting to see Elm have a moment of emotional vulnerability was a really nice touch.
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I compketely agree.
One of the most tired things in the Nuzlocke community is the whole "Welcome to the world of Pokemon!" speech is usually handled as comedic exposition, delivered frantically as if to get through it and be done. I really wanted to see it be used to build the world and the characters for once. I'm super glad it's resonating with people! ^^
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I love how the only representatives of my country so far in pokΓ¨mon are a mafia-like team's leader and his son XD. But Silver's my favorite character ever, so I guess I can accept that...I wonder, how will YOU develop him? I've seen a bit of everything, but it's always nice to see new rivals developing, and from what I've seen so far you will probably surprise me. Keep the good work on, 'cause you got yourself a watcher! Β Β
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Well thank you so much, kind sir!!!
I hope I will surprise you. Considering every theory I've seen so far, I think I just might.
I hope I continue to entertain you.
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Oooh? Now I'm REALLY curious XD
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And just like that, everything got a little more... angsty!
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Angsty, red, and italian!
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Such a terrible combination! XD
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Oh, Elm, so cute!
And the Rival!
...This time you cheated us well: they DID pick their starter, but we don't know yet which they are!
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It was awesome from the beginning to the end ! Really well scripted and executed ! Also, it might be the first time that I see Elm depicted as caring as you did. Lovely ^^
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You're too kind, good sir! Thank you very much! ^^
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And you're too good, kind sir ! :3
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silver is NOT some creep stalking at a window waiting to break into places to steal one of the precious? SOLD!
also (and i probably said this already, heck, everybody probably said this already) your elm is the best depiction of a caring father i've seen in a nuzlocke comic, my own waterworks might be running ;_;
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You win the awards for kindred spirits in regards to how Silver needs to be portrayed more often, and the one for making my day because I managed to make you feel something. :'3
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So there WAS a third trainer. I thought Elm lied about it to them, so they won't feel sorry for the unpicked Pokemon.
And then Silver would have stolen the last one later.
But I am interested to see where this is going.
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Only time will tell. :3
I wanna throw out a few curceballs before the full load is blown, yaknowhatimsayin?
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Silver, I totally forgot about him, nice to see him, for some reason the Azumarill looks so small now and you promised you were going to show the starters this timeΒ Β ........ Be carefulΒ , foxy is coming for you, prepare to be part of the bite of 2015.Β
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It's because of the perspective in each shot. Azure is farther away.
And yeah, I know I'm a total tease. But it'll pay off. Trust me.
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I can't Ursaring to wait, you have been teasing us for so long and in that very first page you made the starters personalities so well, I hope they don't disappoint. Don't worry, I just wanted to make that really bad joke, I will wait a bit long but, I won't make any promises for foxy he has already been released and I can no longer control him (he likes to hide in closets, under beds and abandoned Chuck e CheeseΒ restaurants).
Did you get my 5 nights at freddy's reference?Β
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You continue to tease us about the starters! How cruel! But this page is really pretty and Elm's emotion at letting his kids go off on his own is really sweet.
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Yeah... I'm terrible. I promise It'll pay off though. Don't worry!
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Hhhhnnnnngh, the teases! Actually, by this point it's a little funny.
Also, Silver - Dun dun dunnnnn!
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I've been called a turd on more than one occasion. xD
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Trash prince arrives on scene! This is a gorgeous comic so far.
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Trash prince! Lol! I'm gonna have to remember that one.
Thanks a lot! I super appreciate it!! ^^
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Hmm, so "Silver" was supposed to show upβ¦? Or is he merely PRETENDING to be the oneβ¦
And geez. We still don't know their starters. XD'
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All will be revealed in time. :3
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Here comes the rival! (These pages look amazing btw!)
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